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Reviews, Tips and What-Not

Review: Xenophobia

Eh.. what the heck! I'm just gonna jump straight into it!

Amazing! Very little mistakes (but when there was it was simply just a letter missing from a word).

What you're writing about is a very serious topic and its good that you're taking it seriously. Fair play to you, you are a fantastic writer!

Even though there were the few mistakes (which were understandable and not that important) I have to give you 9 and a half/10. Well deserved!

Shortest review ever! Sorry...

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Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

DarlingKK_123 DarlingKK_123
1/27/15

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

kkgal14 kkgal14
1/27/15

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

xRockMex xRockMex
1/26/15

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??