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Reviews, Tips and What-Not

Review: Ink

Haven't updated in awhile! So sorry, I was really busy.
But I'm here now and this review in on Ink by kkgal14 and xXgracefullybrokendarlingXx

Lets get ready to rumble! *Drumroll please*

The story was really good.
The writing had a nice flow, the sentences weren't lacking a nice roll, if you know what I mean...
The poems in it were amazing!!
I like the way the character pictures carried a theme, as in, they're all black and white. I think having good, matching pictures is a good trait in a story.
Its a very descriptive story, which can sometimes be a bad thing, but I think for this story, its good and it gives the story a nice effect.
Wording things differently from usual will make others read it differently than usual, and this story is written differently from the usual way stories are written, so people may be reading it in that different way... But that's not a bad thing.
You may be wondering, 'What the '@%&$ is this girl on about?' If you know - you know, if not, urm... What the @%&$ am I on about?

I'd say this is an 8/10, the story needs a bit more excitement, but maybe that's just because its still earlier on in the story, so things may be still warming up, maybe I'll change the score once more happens...




Notes

God, I have not gotten a bad story yet! You're all so great!
*Cheesy Grin*
:)

Ps. Seriously, the poems in Ink are amazing! I love them! :O

Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

DarlingKK_123 DarlingKK_123
1/27/15

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

kkgal14 kkgal14
1/27/15

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/27/15

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

xRockMex xRockMex
1/26/15

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/26/15
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