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Listen To Your Heart ~ COMPLETED

Miscommunication

Louis’ POV
I peaked out from behind the closet door. She stared at all of them in confusion. She knew that they were very well alive. I knew that too, but I’m waiting for the perfect moment to jump her.

“Who wants pizza?” she asked loudly near Niall. Niall didn’t move. I was so proud of him. “Wow, that’s a first.”

I could hear Liam trying to hold back laughing, so I took this as the perfect move to strike. I carefully opened the door, but my cover was blown when the door squeaked open. I guess it still scared her though as her squeal filled the flat. I laughed my arse off and jumped her anyway.

“You should have seen your face. That wasn’t even that bad compared to what I was going to do,” I said. Everyone started to get up from their places and started laughing too.

“Lou,” she choked out, “You’re… killing me… Get… off…”

“Right, sorry about that.”

Harmony’s POV
I gasped for air as Louis climbed off of me. Never have I ever been so scared in my life. Well, not really, but I freak out at the smallest of noises. What can I say? I’m an easy scarer?

“You best be getting ready! We’re going to go party at the club,” Louis yelled.

“We’ll help!” screamed the girls. They dragged me to my room to change.

They threw a dress at me. I gladly put it on and straightened my hair. http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=82812892 I try to balance myself quickly as I stood up in the extremely high heels. I never thought I would wear heels; I’m super clumsy and can easily fall in these.

“Oh my gosh! Look at you in those heels. You’re almost as tall as Harry now,” El said.

“Haha, very funny. I think I like that though.”

“Good, your legs look great in heels,” Perrie said.

“I know right?!?!” I said sarcastically. We all laughed. Then, someone knocked at the door. I was the only one ready, so I went outside to see Louis standing there. “Hey, birfday boy! What’s up?”

“I need some advice. Can we talk outside?” he asked a bit nervously.

“Sure. Anything for you.”

“Great! Guys we’re going to be outside for a moment! BRB!”

“Woah! Nice heels, Har!” Niall yelled as I was dragged out the door.


“Thanks Nialler!” I yelled back. I shut the door behind me, and we made our way to the elevator. Louis hit the roof button and we started our decent. When we finally reached the top, we walked to the edge of the roof and looked out to the city. “So, what did you want to talk about?”

“I want to propose to El,” he said. I smiled widely. I knew of us all, they would be the first to get married. “I haven’t told the guys, and I really need advice on how I should do this.”

“Aw… That’s so cute. You should just be yourself. El loves you; there’s no way she would say no. You two are meant for each other.”

“Thank you, Harmony. You give great advice,” he pulled me into a hug which I gladly accepted.

“Now, let me see the ring?”

“Sure. Let me just…” he scavenged through his pockets, “Here!” He pulled out a box, but just as he opened it the ring dropped out. “Oops, let me get that.” He bent down on his knees to get it. Once he picked it back up, he handed it to me still on his knees. And that’s when the elevator opened…

Louis’ POV
“El, this isn’t what it looks like!” I said.

“Oh really? Because it looks like my boyfriend is proposing to my best friend. How could you? And to think I thought I loved you. We are done Louis! And you! I never want to see you ever again! I hope Harry never remembers you. You are a cold, heartless bitch!” she yelled, not letting either of us explain. Tears streamed down her face, and I finally stood up.

“No, El. He wasn’t-” Harmony started.

“Save it. I don’t want to hear what you have to say,” she said.

“El wait!” I ran towards the elevator, but it closed just as I reached the door. I too started the waterworks and turned to slide my back against the wall until I was in a sitting position.

“Louis, I am so sorry. I-”

“It’s okay, Harmony. It’s not your fault. It did look that way…”

“You’ll get her back, Lou. I promise. I’ll make it my goal to get you two back together.”

“Thank you,” I cried. She helped me off of the ground and we went to their flat to see if El was there.

I opened the door and walked into the living room. “Hey guys. Is Eleanor here?” I asked.

“No, she went to get you. Were you crying, Lou?” Zayn asked.

“Um… yeah. I was.” It was no use in lying to them. I need help, and my friends can help me.

“Why?” Niall asked. “It’s your birthday. You shouldn’t be crying.”

I looked over to Harmony and nodded my head towards them. I didn’t want to explain what had happened. She understood. Harmony explained how I was going to propose, and then I showed her the ring but dropped it. Then when I went to pick it up, the elevator opened and it looked like I proposed. Why am I explaining this to myself? Well, that’s just what happens when your saddest memories replay through your head. I just lost the love of my life because of an accident and on my birfday too… El, please come back.

Comments

@rittis21
It's the same characters and it's a sequel to this sequel… Sort of like a trilogy(with her answer)? I'll admit that it's a bit of a drag, but trust me Harony's story isn't over yet (;
yeah, i've seen it but hum .. did you write her answer or just made a new story??
rittis21 rittis21
11/18/13
@rittis21
Check chapter 50 :)
WHERES THE REST OF THE FIC? DID YOU STOP WRITTING? PLEASE TELL ME YOU DID NOT. WHAT'S THE ANSWER? DID SHE SAY YES OR WHAT? PLEAASE, I BEG YOU, I'VE READ THIS WHOLE STORY IN ONE DAY BECAUSE I'M SO ADDICTED TO IT. WHERE'S THE REST? ANSWER ME PLEASE :((
rittis21 rittis21
11/18/13
I love your story if it isn't a bother would u mind checking out mine its called 3 days to fast ive just now made it to the nineth page of popular stories and im trying to make it to the first page if you don't have time i completely understand and thanks anyways