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Past The Ending

A Short Coma - Chapter 7 -

I tried to ignore Niall's question and focus on cleaning Harry, but then Harry asked the same thing. The walkie talkie went off and Zayn was speaking into it, "What the hell happened, I heard a gun get fired!" I looked at Harry's face, he still had some smudge's, but I grabbed his, because mine fell off when I was crawling back here, and spoke into it again, "well, ehm.. we had one of them crawl half way through the window and bit Harry in the shoulder and I put him in a coma", then I hear Liam shout in the receiver, "WHAT, WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE GOT BIT, AND YOU PUT HIM IN A COMA?!? DJ STOP THE RV!" "NO DON'T STOP, THERE'S LIKE 50 OF THEM BEHIND US!", I screamed back as Harry passed out on my lap. Just then, I saw Liam poked his head out the window, to see if I was lying or not, I wasn't.


once we got on the main road, I notice the creature's becoming distant by the minute. They were driving really fast. I spoke into the receiver, "Ok guy's, I think we're long gone from those thing's, you can stop the car's to come check on Harry", then Niall slammed on the breaks, flinging me and Harry's body in the seat in front of us, "NIALL, WE DIDN'T HAVE SEAT BELTS AND I COULD'VE KNOCKED MYSELF OUT!" I yelled at him, "Whoop's, sorry, I just really wanted to see him, even though he look's lifeless", he apologized while I put him buck up on the seat's and placing his head on my lap. Soon DJ picked Harry up and put him in the RV, and came back out to transfer their supplies to our RV. While they were doing that, I went into my room where DJ placed Harry, I put his head in my lap and just stared down at him. A small tear slid down the side of his face, but I caught it and wiped it away. I leaned my ear down to his chest to hear his heart rate, it was really fast, he was panicking, he doesn't know what's happening. So, I whispered in his ear, "It's ok Harry, it's me, Violet, you were bit and I gave you a small dose of the antidote. Now you're in a coma, it's apart of the healing process." I leaned down to hear his heart rate again, it was gradually slowing down, then I began to pet his fluffy hair for a few minute's. I put his head back down, and gently kissed his forehead and walked out to explain to the other's what happened.


Harry's P.O.V. [still in a coma]


I feel someone picking up my head and placing it on their lap. I let a tear fall, I didn't know who it was, it was dark and I couldn't see anything or move any of my limb's, I was horrified. Whoever it was, wiped away my tear away and bent down to hear my heart rate, I was pretty sure it was beating a mile a minute. She then removed her head and whispered in my ear, "It's ok Harry, it's me, Violet, you were bit and I gave you a small dose of the antidote. Now you're in a coma, it's apart of the healing process." When I heard her beautiful voice, I automatically calmed down, her voice always calmed me down, I really like her, but I don't think she has an interest in me. She leaned back down to hear my heart, I think she smiled, she lifted her head back up and began petting my hair. Violet sent shiver's through my paralyzed body. She stopped and placed my head down and kissed my forehead, I wish it were my lip's. Oh god, I think I'm falling or her!


Back to Violet's P.O.V.


I thought it was a bad idea to kiss his forehead, but too late, can't take it back. I walked into the main room to see them all looking at me and I took a seat in between DJ and Lisa, "which story first, Harry being in a coma or the Antidote?" I said tiredly, it was already 10 o'clock, we've been driving for hour's. "Harry's coma", they all said, "well, long story short, Niall took the wheel while I crawled back to examine if he had any bite's, he had one on his right shoulder, I gave him a small dose of the antidote and the coma is apart of the process, because It work's faster if he is not stressed out in any way and Donnie can you tell the other story I'm really tired!" I complained, "Donnie?" the guy's said, "Yes, Donnie, his full name is Donnie Johnson Riggs, put his first and last initials together his name is DJ and didn't I tell you that before? NOW OFF TO BED!" I said storming into my bedroom, realizing that Harry was in there, but I was to lazy to sleep in the main room, and plopped down on the bed next to him and instantly fell asleep. What a horrible mistake!


I soon was awaken by a pair of hand's around my waist, while my head was in his chest, and small murmuring. I thought it was my brother who was holding me, but when I looked up it was Harry! I instantly jumped up, causing him to jerk awake. Then I heard laughing behind me, "What, you guy's looked so cute together!" Louis said giving me a wink, thank god my brother wasn't here, he would've drop kicked Harry out the window right now. Then I realized that Liz or Kit Kat wasn't in the room, good, the would've told DJ. "This stay's between us or else I will murder you guy's", they all nodded and left the room, except Harry, he just plopped back down on the bed an asked, "why did you kiss me on the forehead when I was in a coma?" Shit, I do NOT want to talk about this!

Notes

I'll now b adding P.O.V's a little now and then! :3 hope ya like mah story so far!

Comments

@Sweet 101
I know this is REALLY late but what happened to her? I'm seeing all these comments that she died .This was the first story I ever read that was a fanfiction she was so nice i dont believe she could be dead, i stopped reading a very long time ago because i got busy and it just seems unreal i remember having a conversation with her and its just weird

@Sweet 101
I know this is REALLY late but what happened to her? I'm seeing all these comments that she died .This was the first story I ever read that was a fanfiction she was so nice i dont believe she could be dead, i stopped reading a very long time ago because i got busy and it just seems unreal i remember having a conversation with her and its just weird

@Sweet 101
I know this is REALLY late but what happened to her? I'm seeing all these comments that she died .This was the first story I ever read that was a fanfiction she was so nice i dont believe she could be dead, i stopped reading a very long time ago because i got busy and it just seems unreal i remember having a conversation with her and its just weird

I haven't been here for a long time , I promise I would have never liked the wattpad I broke that promise .... I came back here and I know its stupid now but the most saddest thing ever LovingLife I didn't even knew her real name . I love her writing and I still do . I think about her from time to time .(sigh) I know those times that u can't find the words that your are feeling ? That's how I am now . Too bad she can't write again to sometimes the 'greatest people leave their all ' .

Sweet 101 Sweet 101
9/20/14

It's almost - about a year ........

Sweet 101 Sweet 101
9/20/14