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Chapter 5

Vivian's POV





Lou's words from a week ago are still stuck on replay in the back of my head. He's just not the type that falls in love. And for him to say that he actually likes someone, that's something special. She's probably a beauty. I mean, if this is the first girl he likes she would be pretty, right? Well with him being famous and all that.


"Babe, go to sleep," Liam groans next to me as I impatiently tap my book's cover with my index finger.


"Sorry babe, it's just so frustrating not to know," I sight.


"Lou's crush, you mean?" He asks sitting up from the bed. I look at him and smile. His sleepy face is so cute.


"He'll tell you when the time is right," he kisses me softly at the comer of my mouth.


"Where are you going?" I question him as he walks to the door


"Coffee?" He answers in which came out more like a question.


I open my book again. This is the forth time I'm ready 'Romeo and Juliet'', but damn I will never get tired of this book. It's amazing! Beyond amazing actually!


I read over a few words then sigh.


"I give up," I tell myself as I place the book back on the bedside table.


I lay on my stomach and pull the duvet over my back then try my best to fall asleep.










"Baby," I hear Liam whisper in my ear whilst kissing me in my neck. I smile with my eyes still closed and push some hair out of my face. I feel his hand run over my lover back then over my bum, then his hands stop at my thigh. He starts sliding his fingers into my panties but stop once I turn around to look at him with shock.


"Don't ever, and I mean ever, wake me up like that again, alright?" I tell him with a serious tone.


"Geez babe, relax," he holds his hands up in surrender then walks to the bathroom shaking his head.


I sigh then slowly make my way out of bed but gasp one I see Louis standing in the doorway with a pretty pissed off look.


"Good morning," I tell him kissing him on his cheek.

He nods then turns around walking away. What's his problem?


"Baby!" Liam yells from the bathroom.


"Coming,"











Louis' POV






"He fucking touched her," I run a hand through my hair shaking my head.


"They are still together, you know that right?" Harry asks as he holds out a beer for me.


"Yea but while she was sleeping? Really? They should do shit like that in the privacy of their own house, not a house filled with other people," I tell him scanning through the TV channels. I switch the TV off since there's nothing on and turn my attention back to Harry.


"Have you told her?" He asks me


"No, not really," I shake my head.


"Maybe you should,"


"When the times right,"


I hear someone clear their throat and look to my left to find a furious Liam.


"How much of that have you heard?" Harry asks him. Liam looks at Harry then back at me. The skin around his hand turns white from the tight fist he's making.


"Enough," he spits out and storms back out of the room.

Notes

Comments

@Telichia DLR
I can't wait!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
Thank you for the comment. There is going to be a second book up before Wednesday. The second book is going to be much different, there's already depressing things written from not only Louis' POV. So I'm excited about posting that chapter for you guys. I'm glad that you like this story, thank yyou for reading it. Much love dear xoxo

Throughout this whole story, I wanted Vivian to be with Louis, but as I read how Liam is heartbroken, my heart yearned for Liam. When Liam and Vivian got back together and she got her memory back, I felt my heart break for Louis. Gosh, this story got me loving both Louis and Liam. At this point, even though the story ended, I still don't know who to pick. My mind keeps going back to when Liam slapped Vivian and when Liam called Vivian a slut when they were at Zayn's house, so I don't know if I want to forgive him for that. But then again, Liam was so loving towards her and doesn't seem like he would do it again. I think Louis doesn't love her in that way. He THINKS that he loves her, but his love for her is more in a best friend way. So, I guess my mind is made up. Liam makes her happy. Liam needs her and she needs him. Liam and Vivian would be better off with each other as a couple than Louis and Vivian. I love this story! I know I have commented throughout this story, but to be honest, I started reading this story only yesterday. But overall, I love it! I love the storyline, I love the plot, I love everything about it! This is like no other story I've read before! Amazing work! Are you making a second book or making a epilogue? I think and epilogue would be better for this type of story insted of a second book unless you have more ideas coming. Once again great job on this! :)

@breadboy101
Thank you <333 The second book will be up shortly :)

@Mimi_Bell
No, they can't. ;)