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Leave Your Lover

Chapter 2

Vivian's P.O.V




"Would you rather be raped by monkeys than by an octopus?" Louis cocks an eyebrow as he points the bottle's point to my body.


"Erm," I bite my lip scratching the back of my head.


After the guys finished recording we all decided to grab some booze and come back to Zayn and Perrie's flat for the night. Lou wanted to play spin the bottle, so here I am, being the lucky bastard.


"An octopus," I frown at Louis. I know that it came out more of a question than an answer. Everyone bursts out laughing.



"What?" I pout.


"Either way, you're fucked," Zayn laughs.


I roll my eyes at everyone and get up to get myself another beer.


"Where ya goingggg?" Louis bumps into me.


I steady his drunken body and help him sit on the mattress. "I'll be right back, stay here alright?" I tell him as he kisses the back of my hand.


I grab my beer in the kitchen and walk back to Liam who's standing by the coffee table but Lou grabs hold of my waist and pulls me on top of his lap.


"Lou let go," I giggle as he tickles me. "S-Stop!" I laugh again.


He finally let's me go and I look up to find an angry looking Liam.


Lou pulls me closer to his chest and cuddles me.


"Don't hurt my Vi," he states firmly but somehow still manages to sound like a child.


I giggle at him. There's no other guy like Lou and I'm happy for that. I love him as a brother. He was and always will be my best friend. Why would I ever do anything to hurt him or lose him?

Notes

"I just want to run to you and I hope you know that every time I don't I almost do."

Comments

@Telichia DLR
I can't wait!

queen.lizzy queen.lizzy @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/4/15

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
Thank you for the comment. There is going to be a second book up before Wednesday. The second book is going to be much different, there's already depressing things written from not only Louis' POV. So I'm excited about posting that chapter for you guys. I'm glad that you like this story, thank yyou for reading it. Much love dear xoxo

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/4/15

Throughout this whole story, I wanted Vivian to be with Louis, but as I read how Liam is heartbroken, my heart yearned for Liam. When Liam and Vivian got back together and she got her memory back, I felt my heart break for Louis. Gosh, this story got me loving both Louis and Liam. At this point, even though the story ended, I still don't know who to pick. My mind keeps going back to when Liam slapped Vivian and when Liam called Vivian a slut when they were at Zayn's house, so I don't know if I want to forgive him for that. But then again, Liam was so loving towards her and doesn't seem like he would do it again. I think Louis doesn't love her in that way. He THINKS that he loves her, but his love for her is more in a best friend way. So, I guess my mind is made up. Liam makes her happy. Liam needs her and she needs him. Liam and Vivian would be better off with each other as a couple than Louis and Vivian. I love this story! I know I have commented throughout this story, but to be honest, I started reading this story only yesterday. But overall, I love it! I love the storyline, I love the plot, I love everything about it! This is like no other story I've read before! Amazing work! Are you making a second book or making a epilogue? I think and epilogue would be better for this type of story insted of a second book unless you have more ideas coming. Once again great job on this! :)

queen.lizzy queen.lizzy @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/4/15

@breadboy101
Thank you <333 The second book will be up shortly :)

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/4/15

@Mimi_Bell
No, they can't. ;)

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/4/15
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