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Chapter 1

Vivian's POV



"Lou, no!" I shout between giggles as Lou tries to throw me into the swimming pool of his parents' house.


My family and I came here for dinner but like always, my father wants to stay longer. So it's 1am, and here we are. Louis and I decided to go for a swim, cause God knows, this heat is too much. Our parents are still inside of the house; either talking and drinking, or playing games like they always do, while drinking. I'm not a huge fan of drinking, so I usually give that one a skip. Unless I go out with Liam and the boys.


Lou throws me into the water then jumps in too. I splash him with water then swim to get away from him.


"Come here!" He shouts after me.


"No!" I yell as I swim away breathlessly. Thank God that this swimming pool is huge!


"Don't make me go there and get you!" He yells after me. I turn around to find him smirking at me.


"Whatcha gonna do?" I ask him giggling.


"Oh, you know," he winks at me then starts swimming after me.


I try to swim backwards but I bump into the side of the swimmimg pool with my back and realize that I won't have enough time to climb out.


"Ok ok I surrender!" I yell and throw my arms up in the air.


"You better!" He bursts out laughing.


I laugh too then swim past him to get out of the water.


"Aww getting out already?" He pouts at me as I dry myself with a towel.


"Shhh, do you hear that?" I whisper to him.


"Hear what?" He lifts an eyebrow.


"Shit that's my phone!!" I yell as I run to pick up my ringing phone. I don't bother checking the caller ID.


"Heyo!" I yell into the phone.
"Woah, babe, not so loud," Liam chuckles.
"Hey baby," I whisper.
He laughs at me. "Where are you?"
"I'm at Lou's," I tell him as Lou comes up to me and hits me with his towel.


"Ow!" I whine. Lou starts laughing.


"Look away I wanna put dry shorts on," Lou whisper-shouts at me.


I stick my tongue out at him then turn my back to him.


"Ok well see you tomorrow then babe," Liam yawns.
"Goodnight baby, I love you," I tell him.
"I love you more," he ends the call.


I put my phone back in my handbag then turn around. But I find a naked Lou.

"Woah, turn around!" He yells. I put my hands over my eyes and burst out laughing. "I told you to turn around!" He tells me as he hits me with his wet towel again.


"I thought you'd be done dressing by now," I tell him in between laughs.


"Yeah yeah, let's go back inside," he says as he throws me over his shoulder and carries me inside.


"Put me doooown!" I hit him on the back of his head with my palm.


"Geez, calm down woman!" He puts me back on the ground and rubs his head.


"Last one in your room has to massage the winner!" I yell as I run up the stairs to his room. "I win!!!" I yell as I collapse onto his bed laughing.


He enters the door breathing heavily then starts laughing too.


"Now where's my massage," I pout at him.


He closes the door then walks to me. "Alright alright calm down missy, take off your shirt," he says pointing to my shirt.


For other people this would seem weird, but we've basically seen each other naked before. We didn't have sex or anything like that, god I would never be able to do that, but when you grow up with someone the way I grew up with Lou, you get used to this kind of things. I pull my shirt over my head so I'm only left in my bra then lay on my stomach on his bed. He climbs on top of me and sits on my bum then puts cream on my back.


"Don't fall asleep again!" Lou yells in my ear.


"But I'm tired!" I yell back.

"Don't yell at me," he says with a sad tone. We burst out laughing again and he rolls off of me.

Notes

"Once you know what it feels like to kiss someone with all of your being and have their hands over you, under you and in every fiber of you, sorry honey but you're fucked."

Comments

@Telichia DLR
I can't wait!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
Thank you for the comment. There is going to be a second book up before Wednesday. The second book is going to be much different, there's already depressing things written from not only Louis' POV. So I'm excited about posting that chapter for you guys. I'm glad that you like this story, thank yyou for reading it. Much love dear xoxo

Throughout this whole story, I wanted Vivian to be with Louis, but as I read how Liam is heartbroken, my heart yearned for Liam. When Liam and Vivian got back together and she got her memory back, I felt my heart break for Louis. Gosh, this story got me loving both Louis and Liam. At this point, even though the story ended, I still don't know who to pick. My mind keeps going back to when Liam slapped Vivian and when Liam called Vivian a slut when they were at Zayn's house, so I don't know if I want to forgive him for that. But then again, Liam was so loving towards her and doesn't seem like he would do it again. I think Louis doesn't love her in that way. He THINKS that he loves her, but his love for her is more in a best friend way. So, I guess my mind is made up. Liam makes her happy. Liam needs her and she needs him. Liam and Vivian would be better off with each other as a couple than Louis and Vivian. I love this story! I know I have commented throughout this story, but to be honest, I started reading this story only yesterday. But overall, I love it! I love the storyline, I love the plot, I love everything about it! This is like no other story I've read before! Amazing work! Are you making a second book or making a epilogue? I think and epilogue would be better for this type of story insted of a second book unless you have more ideas coming. Once again great job on this! :)

@breadboy101
Thank you <333 The second book will be up shortly :)

@Mimi_Bell
No, they can't. ;)