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Free Story Reviews

Summary

Have a story, wanna know how it holds up against the rest I've been reading fanfictions for over 10 years now, I might be able to provide some insight! =)

I'm a senior in college, I've been writing fanfiction for 8 years reading it for about 12 now, I've read some of the best and the worst. And when I first started I was awful, now though I've gotten better... a lot better in comparison. I've gone through it and I'd love to help you though it... if you need it. Want to know where you stand in the fray of it all, I'll try and give you a heads up, and help you out.

In the first chapter I'll tell you what all you'll get to see from my reviews

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- HarryGirl13

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Would you pretty pretty please review my story, "Mainstream"? I'm coauthoring with @ThatRandomUnicorn.
It's a pretty original story if I do say so myself, but you have to read the summary to figure out why. Thanks!
Xoxo,
~ice

iceskatez iceskatez
10/2/14

@PVRIS
Oh I just know odd things like that, my friends laugh at me that whenever they don't know something they just ask me cause chances are I'll know it.

I totally get that I've done that with a few stories i've written before so i can revise them and re put them up better than they were before

HarryGirl13 HarryGirl13
9/14/14

@HarryGirl13

Omg, people must've been so confused, lol. But I am deleting the story and I want you to know t had nothing to do with your critic. I loved that you were brutally honest with me it actually made me smile.
Again, thank you for taking time out of your day to read e story and review it, I appreciate it (:

PVRIS PVRIS
9/14/14

@PVRIS
That's fine I like to know about how my reviews are taken. the last time someone wrote a review of my story 'Never Is A Promise' I tried to give them feedback since they missed a key part of the story and they didn't like it.

I know that I tend to be harsh but if you've read any of the example I put as the rating of a 10 it makes sense, cause that story sets the bar really high. Yes! Writing smut is awkward! haha I figured it was a random place when you said I-64 lol cause thats in Kentucky.

HarryGirl13 HarryGirl13
9/14/14

And quite frankly I find writing smut really awkward so I'm gonna suck at it lol I'm sorry

PVRIS PVRIS
9/14/14
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