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Big Hot Mess (A One Direction Fan-fiction)

Chapter seven: "What is so wrong with kissing a girl?"

-Emily-

I finally got back to our table inside the club and looked at the girls. “We’re leaving. Now.”

“What? Why? What happened?” Maria asked before looking at Sarah that had already gotten up from her seat and started to move towards me. “I’m sorry, I have to go.” Maria said to Liam and kissed him on the cheek. “Text me tomorrow?” she said apologetic.

“Okay… Sure.” He said looking as confused as the rest of them.




-Sarah-

The taxi-ride home was completely silent, and as we got inside the apartment everyone few words were exchanged, before everyone decided that they just wanted to go to bed. I kind of wanted to know what had happened at the club to make Emily wanting to leave to abruptly. However, I figured it would be better to ask her tomorrow when we were all sober. I knew it had to be Harry though. I told her not to go there! It’s not that Emily’s naïve, but she likes to believe in the best in people, and the fact that she’s stubborn as hell does not help at all…

As I got in bed I heard a knock on my door. “Sarah? Can I come in, please?”

“Yeah, of course. Come on in…”

Emily walked into the room looking sad. “I just wanted to say sorry for being a bitch earlier tonight… I’m sorry for not listening to you.” She sat down at the end of the bed while looking at me.

“No, that’s fine. Don’t worry, Em.” I said holding my hands out, signalling her to come and give me a hug. When she leaned in I continued, “I knew telling you about him wouldn’t stop you anyway. That’s were we’re alike – we’re both stubborn as hell.” We both started to slightly laugh.

“Yeah, I guess. Aren’t you gonna tell me ‘I told you so’?”

“Well, I think I’ve used that card one too many times already, Em…”

“Heey!” she said now smiling up at me.

Then Maria came in the door smiling, “aww, you should see how cute you look now!”

“Get in here!” I said, before she jumped in the bed with us. Well, this was cosy!

“I’m sorry for making you leave Liam tonight, Maria…” Emily said.

“No, don’t worry about it. Are you okay though, you didn’t seem too fine at the club?”

“Yeah, I’m fine now that I have you girls here. I’m never touching alcohol again!...” She said as we all laughed.

“Well, we all know that’s not going to happen”…



-Harry-

“Is it alright if me and Eleanor crash at your place tonight, Niall?” Louis said as we walked out the club. “I don’t think El here will make it to my place.” Eleanor had been complaining about feeling tired and Louis being the most overprotective boyfriend of the year, he would always do whatever she wanted.

“Yeah, sure! But I don’t want to hear any noises coming from the guestroom… I’m sooo tired,” Niall replied, rolling his eyes.

Zayn had already taken off, so now it was just Liam and I. I’d been staying at his place for the last week since my house was being renovated – yes, again!

“So, I guess we’ll see you around!” I shouted while waving at them getting in the car.

“Yeah, see yah, Hazz! See yah, Liaaam” Louis shouted with a funny voice.

“Good night, Liam. Good night Harreeh! Niall said acting like a teenaged girl. Sometimes I wonder what’s going on in their heads…



The car-ride back to Liam’s was awfully quite. I tried to make some sort of conversation, but Liam wasn’t really in the mood for talking. “Is there something wrong?” I asked.

“No, Harry, everything’s fine…” …

“Well, you don’t seem fine”

“I was just hoping to spend more time with Maria tonight, that’s all. I don’t know what happened to her friend, but she sounded really pissed off, Harry. And now I won’t be able to see her again!” He sounded angry.

“Who? Maria? Why, not? It really seemed like you hit it off?”

“Well, yeah we did! That’s just it! But now I wont be able to see her anymore because of that little stunt you pulled off…” What?
How is this my fault? What did I ever do?

“You’re blaming me?!”

“Well, I assume that girl Emily was with you before she stormed in taking the girls with her?”

What? I don’t even know why she stormed off. Everything was going just fine before she decided to leave me feeling like a complete idiot. “Well, yeah… but… I didn’t do anything. We sat outside talking, and when we kissed…”

“Wait. What? You kissed her?” Seriously?...

“Yes, I did Liam. What is so wrong with kissing a girl? Why is this such a big of a deal to everyone?” I remember wanting to kiss her all evening. I don’t know what it is about that girl, but she always seems to make me feel like an idiot. I remember feeling so stupid and not knowing what to say to her. She made me nervous, and I... Wait. What? Did I just say that a girl I making me feel nervous?

“It is a big deal when the girl ends up angry or sad. Obviously she doesn’t feel the same way!” Ouch!..

“Okay, that’s just mean… It’s not like I forced myself on her!” I said, now feeling angry. Yes, I started the kiss, but she kissed me back! And …I know that she was into it. It was not until I began stroking her leg that… “Oh…”

Liam just looked at me expecting an explanation. “Oh?”

“Yeah, I kind ‘a might have gone a bit far…” Maybe she thought I was moving to fast?

“Well, that would explain it”, he said now rolling his eyes.

I just sat there in silence staring at the road ahead. Our driver had just turned of to the street where Liam lived.



-Liam-

I unlocked the door and went inside, with Harry trailing along a few meters behind. I don’t know, but I felt kind ‘a drunk. After Maria and the girls left, Niall and I had take some shots. Maybe, that wasn’t such a good idea… I had been a bit harsh on Harry in the car. I knew that he wasn’t really like that.

The thing about Harry that most people don’t know is that he’s actually not a player like every magazine seems to think. He’s always been a charmer with the ladies, that’s for sure… but he never treated them any differently than a gentleman would. Harry was actually one of the guys who didn’t bring home girls, in comparison to the rest of the guys. He wanted something more, he had said once to us guys.

What happened to night had never happened before. I can’t believe that he just randomly kiss a girl he just met unless …he must have really liked her.

“Hey, you alright mate?” I said as he came into the living room.

“Yeah, just a bit tired… I’m sorry if I ruined you night and chances with Maria.”

“No, I’m sorry. I was acting like a tosser back in the car. You didn’t deserve that… and I’m sure I’ll see Maria again someday.”

“Why don’t we text her now?” He said with a smile on his face.

“No, I don’t think that’s a good idea, man,” I said thinking that they already might be asleep. Besides, that would be too pushy.

Before I realised, Harry had taken my phone from my back pocket and started running off to the bathroom. “No! Harry! What the hell?... Stop!” I said while running after him.

“You need to text her, Liam! She’s clearly into you and now I have a chance to meet Emily again too.” He said after locking the door behind him.

“What? No, what are you doing?” This was so typical Harry behaviour. “It’s too soon!”

Two minutes later Harry came out the door with a smug grin on his face. I grabbed the phone from his hands and looked at the text he’d sent.

Maria! I just wanted to say that it was nice too see you again tonight. ;) Do you want to maybe hang out tomorrow or something? You could bring Emily too! Harry would like to see her again ;) ;) xxxxx

Oh my god… I sincerely hope that she’s lost her phone or something.

When my phone started beeping five minutes later, Harry once again grabbed it before I could make a move. Wow, this alcohol stuff really made my brain slow.

I looked over at Harry who read the text and saw his face fall as he did. He gave me the phone back, smiling a fake half-smile. Looked down at the phone and now understood why.

Hi, Liam. I would love to hang tomorrow. Although, Emily’s not very keen on meeting Harry again. I’ll talk to you tomorrow. Sleep tight x

Notes

So, what do you guys think of this chapter? Did you like to see the story though Liam and Harry's eyes? Let me know!

Thanks again to everyone who's been voting and commenting! x

Comments

Please, come back...

not_any_maryjane not_any_maryjane
10/25/14

This story really is a 'BIG HOT MESS'. Amazing story..!!

DirecTioner_Sth DirecTioner_Sth
7/29/14

@mikkemille

Please, don't feel forced to! It's your story and it's perfect as you write it! But what can I say? I fell for your Niall. To me he's the most Niall of all Nialls I've read :) xo

Thank you, @marte! Neither can I, haha xx <3

And thank you so much for your comments and feedback, @not_any_maryjane! It's so much easier to know what to write about when someone tells you what they want to hear! ;) I'll try to write more about "the Niall and Sarah drama"! As for Emily, I think we all know that this wasn't the end. <3 xo


mikkemille mikkemille
7/25/14

This chapter is perfection! God, I loved everything, especially Niall getting things straight with Sarah! I want more of those two, please... <3 And the other two, perhaps Emily could be a bit more understanding about Harry's situation, but I guess it makes sense.

Dying to see what falls apart next! xo