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A Walk to Remember
Harry's POV:
As I drove down the road, I would turn to look at Savannah every 10 seconds and she would turn to flash me a smile. 'Harry, you should really keep your eyes on the road' she said when she caught me glaring. 'I just wanna make sure you haven't run off from me yet' I replied. 'I'm still here' she smiled. I continued to drive pass the lights and made a turn down the road. I saw Savannah gaze out the window as we drove pass Hyde Park, that was surrounded by trees decorated with fairy lights.
'Do you wanna go for a walk?' I pointed at the park and she nodded. I pulled over at the side and removed the key. I got out of the car and headed for the passanger door but she was already out. We walked side by side as we entered the park. Savannah looked up at the lit up trees while I looked down wanting to reach out for her hand. I slowly placed my palm with her palm and intertwined my fingers around hers. She stopped walking and looked down at our intertwined hands. I took them up and placed a kiss on her hand. She flashed me a sweet smile and It made me feel relief that she was okay with my advances. We continued to stroll down the empty park hand in hand.
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We'd been walking for 15 minutes when I caught her shivering. 'We should get back, your getting cold' I stopped walking when I saw her rub her arms. 'Okay' she agreed. We turned back around, then something dripped down my face. I looked up and they multiplied. I pulled Savannah to seek shelter under a tree. The rain came down faster and the sky roared as a thunder became visible. Savannah covered her ears and closed her eyes. I wrapped my arms around her and rubbed my hand up and down her back. 'Don't worry, I'm here' I assured her.
The trees didn't do much for a shelter as we still got wet, from the rain that came through the branches.
Okay, I know it's been a long time since you've written this story but is definitely amazing. I love how Savannah is educated and sophisticated. The story has a nice flow to it, it makes sense and is well written! I have also read your other stories and they are also excellent. I think you should continue writing or start a new story because you're really good! <3
3/21/15