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When I'm Gone

Harry's POV:
Louis and Liam pushed me inside my room and soon Niall and Zayn came in as well. 'So, is it happening tonight?' Louis had a smile that stretched up to the moon. 'Haz, we can finally double date' Niall pointed out. 'Bro, honestly I thought it would have taken you a bit longer' Zayn admitted. 'You could have at least told us earlier, so we could have been prepared' Liam pointed out. 'Do you need anything?' Louis emphasised.

'New toothbrush' Niall uttered.


'New bed sheets?' Zayn asked.


'Aha-condoms?' Louis pointed at me.




'What' I chuckled. 'We're not together. She hasn't said yes to me' I clarified. 'Ouh' they chorused with a blank expression. 'I just invited her for dinner' I pointed out. 'Have you told her about tomorrow?' Liam asked. 'No, not yet' I said.



'WAIT!' Louis spoke. 'Everyone shut up' he demanded. 'No one's talking bro' Niall informed him. 'Do you hear that?' he asked. We left the room and the voice got louder. We walked down the stairs and stopped halfway to watch Savannah on the stool.




'I got my ticket for the long way round' Savannah sang as she clapped her hand twice, followed by three taps on the bench with alternating hands. 'Two bottle ‘a whiskey for the way' she taped the cup to the right then clapped. 'And I sure would like some sweet company and I’m leaving tomorrow, wha-do-ya say?' she grabbed the cup and made a rhythm with it in combination with her hand.


'Woh she can sing' Niall uttered. 'Forget the singing, she can make music with a cup' Louis pointed out. 'Damn Harry, I'm taking her if your not' Zayn said. 'Hey, she's mine' I told him.


'When I’m gone, when I’m gone, you’re gonna miss me when I’m gone' she continued to sing as she repeated the same rhythm with the cup. 'You’re gonna miss me by my hair,you’re gonna miss me everywhere, oh, You’re gonna miss me when I’m gone' she continued.



*[Click the link for the song]*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ssOrycjRKGg

We all interrupted by clapping and cheering. She turned around and we all went down to approach her. 'That was so cool' Louis exclaimed. 'Please, keep going' Zayn insisted. She took the cup and moved it closer to her and clapped twice. 'When I’m gone, when I’m gone' she clapped her hand twice. 'You’re gonna miss me when I’m gone' she continued the rhythm. 'You’re gonna miss me by my walk,you’re gonna miss me by my talk, oh, you’re gonna miss me when I’m gone' she repeated the rhythm with the cup.




'Everyone else in the room can see it, everyone else but you' she changed song but keep the same rhythm. We all let out a short laugh. 'Baby you light up my world like nobody else, the way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed' she sang our song as she kept in time with the beat of the cup. 'But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell' she continued. I didn't even think she knew our song. 'You don't know, Oh oh, you don't know you're beautiful' she sang. The boys gestured with their head for me to sing along.

'If only you saw what I can see' I started to sing and Savannah stopped singing but kept the rhythm of the cups going. 'You'd understand why I want you so desperately, right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe' these words are so damn true right now! 'You don't know,Oh oh,You don't know you're beautiful, Oh oh' I sang it like I meant it. 'That's what makes you beautiful' I ended and she did as well with the cups.



'Wooh' the boys all clapped and cheered. 'So you can do any song, it's just the same rhythm?' Zayn asked. 'Yeah, haven't you guys heard of that before?' she chuckled. 'Nope' we all chorused. 'Can you teach me?' Niall reached out for a cup on the bench.



DING!DONG! The doorbell rang. 'Me too' Louis and Zayn raised their hands. 'That's the food' Liam announced. I went with him to go to the door.



We took the food from the delivery man and set it out on the dining table. 'Guys food's ready' Liam told them. Louis and Zayn walked over and sat around the table. 'Surprise Niall didn't come rushing' I said in disbelief. 'We did say food right?' I chuckled. 'His trying to learn the cup song' Louis informed us. 'And probably trying to steal your future girlfriend' Zayn chuckled.






Savannah's POV:
'You nearly got it' I exclaimed as Niall groaned. 'Okay is it the hand or the cup down first?' he asked. 'The hand' I said. 'Okay, I'm gonna try again' he took a deep breath and clapped his hands. I sang along as he made the beat. 'Dammit!' he yelled when he stuffed up. 'Just keep practising' I encouraged him. 'Dinner's ready' Harry came over to us. 'Don't worry I'll get it soon Savannah' Niall said and went up to join the others on the table. Harry led me where they were and pulled out a chair for me to seat and sat on the seat next to me. 'Sorry about the combination, we can never agree on the same food in this house' Louis said. 'We got Chinese and also some seafood and bread lol' Zayn pointed at the food. I looked over at the Chinese meals but they both had poppy seeds. 'Do you want some seafood?' Harry asked. 'No, no it's okay' I shook my head. The seafood platter contained oysters, mussels, clam, squid and octopus (all molluscs) and lobster, prawn, crab, shrimp' (all crustaceans). I watched as the boys digged in to their plate. They ate like there was a global famine. I reached up for a bread and placed it on my plate.'Savannah you must be more hungry than that' Niall said across the table.




'Oh CRAP!' Liam called out with food in his mouth. 'What?' the boys answered also with food in their mouth. Liam chewed his food first before talking. 'Oh love, sorry I forgot' he looked at me with an apologetic look. 'It's okay, I'll just eat some bread' I smiled. 'What's wrong?' Harry asked. 'Savannah's allergic to seeds and seafood' Liam divulged. 'As in all seafood?' Louis asked in disbelief. 'Fish is the only one I can eat' I replied. 'Do you want me to order you something else?' Harry asked. 'No, don't worry about it' I assured him. 'Oh, we have some pasta from last night' Niall pointed out. 'Are you okay with pasta? Sorry though it's left over' Harry said. 'Yeah sure' I nodded. He got up and went to the kitchen







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After dinner we went in the lounge and the boys played Fifa. 'Savannah do you want a turn' Zayn passed me the controllers. 'I'm alright' I declined. 'Harry, are you ready for tomorrow?' Louis asked as he played. 'Crap, no not yet' Harry replied. 'I'll be back Savannah' he told me and ran upstairs. 'Liam, can I have get a drink of water?' I asked. 'Oh sure' he got up and I followed him in the kitchen. He poured water in a cup and handed me the drink. I took two sip then paused then drank the rest. He went to seat on the stool and I sat next to him.


'So how have you been? Beside being busy curing everyone's heart in London' he said and I rolled my eyes at his comment. 'I've been good' I muttered and hanged my head down. 'What's wrong Sav?' he asked. 'Nothing' I kept my head low. 'It's Harry isn't it' he spoke. 'Did he do something wrong?' he asked. 'That's the thing Liam. He hasn't done anything wrong' I still made no eye contact.



'Yesterday he was at my house' I finally turned to look at him. 'And he was talking to me, well he was talking to me while I was asleep, but I wasn't fully asleep so I heard everything he said' I explained. 'What did he say?' Liam asked.



'Liam, he said his falling for me and he told me he loves me' I revealed. 'Ooh' he muttered. 'Don't tell him I told you' I said. 'Well, do you like him?' he asked. 'I don't know, should I go for it?' I uttered a sigh. 'At first I didn't think I could even grow to like him, since we are two different people. Let alone for him to actually like me. I'm not even the type of girl he normally dates' I said. 'Maybe that's why. It's cause your different from the previous girls. Different is good sometimes. Yeah, at times it's a risk, but love is a gamble' he smiled.





'Hey' Harry came in the kitchen and Liam and I turned to him. 'I better get you home, it's getting late' he said. 'Oh okay sure' I hoped down on the stool and Liam and I exchanged a hug. 'I'm always here if you need me' he muttered as we hugged. 'Thanks' I replied and pulled away. We got to the lounge and Niall was playing with the cup while Louis and Zayn still played Fifa. 'Bye guys' I called out and they said bye back. 'Next time you see me I'll be Pro with this cup' Niall spoke in his Irish accent. 'Then we can duet together' I chuckled.


We got in the car and Harry drove me to my house. 'Um Savannah' he spoke as he stopped on a red light. 'Yeah' I turned to him. 'We're off to Sweden tomorrow for the release of our album' he said. 'I'm gonna be away for a couple of days' he informed me. 'Harry, you don't have to tell me your schedule. Your not oblige to in anyway' I told him. 'But I want to' he replied as he pressed on the gas as the lights turned green.


'Don't worry Savannah, I'm gonna come back for you' he quickly turned and flashed me a smile.

Comments

Okay, I know it's been a long time since you've written this story but is definitely amazing. I love how Savannah is educated and sophisticated. The story has a nice flow to it, it makes sense and is well written! I have also read your other stories and they are also excellent. I think you should continue writing or start a new story because you're really good! <3

I hope you choose to update this story!! It's my favorite one of yours!!! I love how Savannah is an educated, sophisticated woman who already has her life in order. The girls in these stories usually aren't even close to her intellectually and I really enjoy it!!

All-is-on All-is-on
2/9/15
Hey! So far I've only read 8 chapters (Sanctuary was the last) but I have to comment. Greys anatomy is my all time favourite tv show. This is a really creative and amazing story! Your such a talented writer.

Ps. What made me comment was the little speech sav gave about the hospital being her home, the one meridith said in the season 6 finale.
@princess.sparkle i loved it just as much as i love you others lol
@hazzaismylover I really wished I could! But I'm putting all my effort on my sequel at the moment, hopefully once I feel comfortable with how that is going, I can get some time to continue this :)