Cardio
Fall In Line
Harry's POV:
'What's the deal with him?' I pointed at Dr.Mckenzie down the hallway. 'William Mckenzie, he's also an Attending Cardiovascular Thoraic surgeon here' Rachel explained. 'What, like Savannah?' I asked. 'NO' they chorused. 'Mckenzie is a great surgeon-' Rachel admitted. 'But not as a great as Savannah' Noah interjected.
'His tactless' Rachel asserted.
'Bossy' Noah added.
'And aggressive' Rachel rolled her eyes.
'And Savannah is nice, kind, caring, pretty, too nice actually' Noah clarified.
'Yooh princess' we turned when we heard William call out as Savannah walked towards him. We watched them from the distance as they chatted. Their lips moved but we couldn't hear the words until their volume increased. 'Your the one that's slow' Savannah yelled out with a short laugh .'You wanna bet' William challenged her with a smirk. 'You're on' Savannah pointed at him and they both ran towards different direction.
'Let the games begin' Noah announced.
'So are they all always like that?' I asked puzzled. 'Yup' they chorused. 'His always competing with her and he also likes her' Rachel informed. 'But don't worry she doesn't like him, like we said cocky, arrogant, tactless' Noah assured me.
'That's one thing you need to know Harry, there's a line' Rachel said. 'A very long line ' Noah emphasised. 'Everybody wants Savannah Grace's heart but no one ever get's Savannah Grace's heart' Rachel chuckled.
'Good, cause I'll be the first.... And the last' I smiled and walked back.
Okay, I know it's been a long time since you've written this story but is definitely amazing. I love how Savannah is educated and sophisticated. The story has a nice flow to it, it makes sense and is well written! I have also read your other stories and they are also excellent. I think you should continue writing or start a new story because you're really good! <3
3/21/15