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Those Eyes

Chapter Ten

The song for this chapter is Two Pieces by Demi Lovato.





Harry-
“Drowned in your love, it’s almost too much. Handle with care, say you’ll be there.”

You’re the first person that has been there for me. The first person that I fully opened up to. The first person that I love whole heartedly. Thank you Harry. For everything you have done. I felt your love from the beginning. You gave me the best year of my entire life and I thank you for that, but it’s my time to go, Harry. I love you with every part of my being, but sometimes love isn’t just enough. I have too many things going on in my head that I would never be able to work out. The only way for me to be at peace is to end it all. I will forever cherish you.

-Nina

I carry that letter with me everywhere I go. I miss her more and more every day, but I know that her decision to end everything was the right one for her. No one should have to go through the things that Nina went through. The year that I spent with her was the best year of my entire life, and I will hold on to that year with every part of me.


Notes

Chapter Ten! Please let me know what you thought!

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xx



-L

Comments

@Ciao Niccie

You don't have any idea how much your feedback means to me. :) Thank you so much. It makes me happy to see that this story will stay with you. I could have been more descriptive, but I thought that it would take away from the rawness of the story. And I also wanted the readers imagination to flow with my own.

It's perfectly fine that you listened to Skyskraper, I', just happy that you listened to music at all, since it is a big part of the story.
awaywithwords awaywithwords
11/12/13
I earnestly implore you to heed my words in their literal and true form... I have never stumbled upon a story, regardless the length, that has moved and stirred such compassion for a character, both characters, like this one. When I read about people crying in their comments, I am skeptical at times, but today I did. It's bittersweet. And although it was dark, it had a different essence to it . . . I almost can't describe it. But this was beautiful and I truly felt like I captured what you were eager to express in this masterpiece. I hope more people recognize and praise you for this story. It deserves more votes than the repetitive scripts that linger on here... This story will haunt me, in a good way.

p.s. I cheated by listening to skyscraper on chapter 11, I was a mess.
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11/11/13
Chpater 1: This is a different way to start a story, but I feel the sad intro sets a good platform for the rest of the chapters, which I like. It's sobering. I like the glimpse of normal and cute conversation, but then I'm reminded of the beginning again... Okay on with the show....chap 2....
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11/11/13