Stormy Weather

@LovinLio
no offense but wtf! When did fanfics start getting critics!?

Great One shot! I am a new critic and just getting a hang of things. I loved how you kept the main character anonymous and the setting really helped get the feeling of their love. This one shot reminds me of Dark. http://onedirectionfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=13374&ageconsent=ok&warning=4(Great Book) I suggest making a follow up of this but not enirely in chronologically in order. Like dont make it like a an actual story just a collection of one shotsor adorable romantic dates, because this has so much potential.
~ Leanna, fanFiction Critic

@DianaGoesOneDirection
Haha alright, thank you very much! x

@hazza Anything you would like! It does not matter. But this story is adorable haha and you're a great writer! :)

@DianaGoesOneDirection
What would you like the second part to be about? :)