Fanfiction 101
Lucky
Lucky
Author: BritineylovesHarry
Rate: 1
I don’t usually comment on short summaries, but I honestly didn’t get yours. It just doesn’t make sense, “The only people who are lucky enough their dreams come true for Kaci it only happens once.” I’m trying to rearrange the words, but that’s not really my problem – it’s yours. The short summary is one of the first things people read, and chances are, if they don’t understand that, they won’t read your story.
After reading the first chapter, I could see just how poor your grammar skills are – which explains why I can’t read your short summary. There were a lot of wrong verb tenses, wrong subject-verb agreement, run-on sentences, spelling errors, punctuation errors, etc. It wasn’t too bad, but it’s still too much for me to correct everything.
The plot is just plain terrible. She’s a poor girl from a poor family, and her rich best friend gets her concert tickets for her birthday as well as VIP passes to meet them afterward. Then they meet, fall in love, and make babies. The End.
Honestly, I just had to stop reading halfway through Chapter 3, because it’s just that predictable. Try to do something that hasn’t already been used, and pay attention more in English-Lit. School won’t kill you, but if you don’t improve your grammar, there are some grammar Nazis who will probably be glad to do so in lieu of school.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
Author: BritineylovesHarry
Rate: 1
I don’t usually comment on short summaries, but I honestly didn’t get yours. It just doesn’t make sense, “The only people who are lucky enough their dreams come true for Kaci it only happens once.” I’m trying to rearrange the words, but that’s not really my problem – it’s yours. The short summary is one of the first things people read, and chances are, if they don’t understand that, they won’t read your story.
After reading the first chapter, I could see just how poor your grammar skills are – which explains why I can’t read your short summary. There were a lot of wrong verb tenses, wrong subject-verb agreement, run-on sentences, spelling errors, punctuation errors, etc. It wasn’t too bad, but it’s still too much for me to correct everything.
The plot is just plain terrible. She’s a poor girl from a poor family, and her rich best friend gets her concert tickets for her birthday as well as VIP passes to meet them afterward. Then they meet, fall in love, and make babies. The End.
Honestly, I just had to stop reading halfway through Chapter 3, because it’s just that predictable. Try to do something that hasn’t already been used, and pay attention more in English-Lit. School won’t kill you, but if you don’t improve your grammar, there are some grammar Nazis who will probably be glad to do so in lieu of school.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
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12/31/16