Fanfiction 101
Perfect Act
(7) At first, I was thinking: Oh boy… here goes another one of those 'best friend' stories. But, boy was I wrong. I actually like how your plot isn't all best friend reunion then finding love; it's about the boys coming to stay with her while their doing work in Australia.
Your grammar wasn't the best, but it definitely isn't the worst, so that's good. The whole dark family past and exboyfriend thing is actually pretty intriguing. I love secrets and mystery personally, so if you have the whole mysterious past thing written well, you've got me.
However, I think the emotions might've gone a little too fast. The boys for the most part, some affectionate feelings and overprotective feelings. Otherwise, your story wasn't that bad. I could see you improving as you continue to write, so good job!
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12/31/16