Fanfiction 101
Unexpected Interests
(9) Dancing [career wise] is basic. Going on tour with One Direction is basic. Not knowing who One Direction is is aggravating. But… I really liked your story. Sure, the story line is pretty basic: group of friends become back-up dancers for One Direction on tour, but the way you put out the story is what really matters. The conflict is phenomenal; I completely ship Jarry[?]. You really do know how to keep your readers on their toes, and your grammar and detail is amazing. I'm out of things to say, but you definitely have to keep writing this! [Link]
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@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16