Fanfiction 101
It takes Patience
(9) I loved the concept of your story. It's so different from the others. Who would have thought to actually give the girl a practical job (wait, I thought that, but you actually did)? Then, she goes off to an internship at a "mental hospital" - I forgot what it was called… where she meets Harry who has some troubled past (not giving away too much).
The only problem I had with it was the title. Instead of "It takes Patience", you need to capitalize "takes" so it looks like "It Takes Patience". Also, the title was cut off on the cover image which, in my opinion, really bothers me. [Link]
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Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
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12/31/16