Fanfiction 101
They Don't Know About Us
(5) Your basic. Well, your story is anyway. I mean, Harry falling for Louis' sister after he specifically told him to stay away? It's just so common. To finish your story to the most recent update, I skipped a few chapters in the middle. The most recent part bothers me a lot, however, because the girls always leave. But guess what! They always come back anyway.
Then, there's the Taylor drama. Can we all just agree to stop using Taylor to add drama in our stories? If you hated that bitch - no offense to anyone - you wouldn't let her be in any aspect of your story. Just leave her the fuck out of things!
Overall, your story was just really stereotypical. I'm sure a lot of people would love it if you had used a more original idea, because you actually have decent writing skills.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16