Fanfiction 101
Let's Be Alone Together
(9) This story is really, really, really good. In fact, I like this one a whole lot better than your other one. The plot itself is incredible. The detail you put into this one is better. Your grammar mistakes are minimal. The only problems I had with it are that the chapters are a bit on the short side and it's hard to tell when you've started a new paragraph. You should put a line of space between paragraphs to define them more. Other than that, I really liked it :) [Link]
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@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16