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Harry Styles had never had a real friend. His parents forbade him of going outside, and interacting with other people. He would sit soundlessly in his room, in front of a window overlooking the street. He would watch as kids his age laughed, and played with eachother. It made him sad to think he had no friends. He would always try to make imaginary friends, but it was never satisfying to him, so he stuck to his parents like glue. They were the only human interaction he had. At the age of 18, his parents died in a mysterious car accident, leaving him alone in the large house. He would still sit in front of the window, looking out at the streets as children played. He longed so bad for a companion. As he frowned at the happiness below, there was a knock on his door. It shocked him, because no one ever came to his house. It was the stereotypical horror movie house at the end of the street. Worn down, and the paint was peeling off. There were never any cars in the driveway, but people knew there was an occupant in the house. It was the house mothers warned their children about.

Harry stood up from his perch at the end of his bed, and smoothed his pants. He quickly made his way to the door, pulling it open. There before him was a young woman, about his age. He stared in confusion. He auburn hair fell just below her shoulder blades, curling at the ends. There was a string of freckles going across the bridge of her nose, and dispersing when it reached her cheeks. Her eyes were a deep shade of blue, like an ocean, Harry imagined. She was about four inches shorter than Harry was, and her smile was breathtaking.

"Hi, I'm Annibell. I'm going door to door, collecting funds for the Breast Cancer Awarness association, and I was wondering if you would like to make a donation." He voice was the perfect pitch, something you would expect to come out of her petite figure. Harry stood wordlessly, taking in every bit of the woman standing before him. She shifted uncomforably, folding her arms over her chest, and clearing her throat. Harry shook his head, coming out of his entranced state. He smiled, and nodded, stepping aside so she could come in.

"Uh, you wait here. I'll go get my checkbook. Would you like some tea?" Harry mumbled, standing in the doorway of the living room. Annibell nodded, her lips parting into a smile.

"Yes please. Thank you." She said, placing her belongings on the coffee table.

Harry quickly got the tea, and rushed back into where Annibell waited, his checkbook in hand. He handed her the cup of tea, and she smiled in appreciation taking it, and thanking him . Harry quickly made a check out for twenty dollars to the Breast Cancer Awarness funds, but didn't sign it. He knew it would be any minute that Annibell would pass out, for he had put in six melatonin pills. He was unsure if it would harm her, or not, but that was a chance he was willing to take. He was sick and tired of being lonely. He needed a friend.

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A/N: What do you guys think of the first chapter ?! I hope you enjoy it. Please leave feedback.

Comments

i like how this is really different
india0183 india0183
12/9/12
another thought: did you also post this on mibba? they still welcome 1D stories, and because they have way more members, it could help you receive feedback... just an idea
oreo-child oreo-child
12/6/12
WOAH wait that last paragraph was an absolute surprise! i would love if you continued this, but i have some questions? like, did Harry's parents leave him inheritance? how are the bills paid if he doesn't interact with people (i wanted to presume that his parents used bank accounts that were set up, but that seems too foretelling, as if they knew they were gonna die)? did people know about him? if yes, how did his parents get away with withholding him from the world? if not, how did he find out they died? did they keep Harry sheltered for selfish reasons or because they knew he was capable of something like that? lots of inquiries, i know. but I'm only asking for clarification and minimal critique. i honestly believe this story had tons of potential with its unique plot (plus I'm a sucker for crazy!Harry) and your vernacular. you have a tale and you want to share it. even if I'm the only one, I'm willing to read it, 'cause this fandom (and most fandoms tbh) needs more fics that take readers out of their comfort zone, makes them think and leaves them wanting more. i think you can write it :) (wrote this on my shitty Android, so if there's a plethora of mistakes i apologize so hard)
oreo-child oreo-child
12/6/12