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Loved you first...{Louis Tomlinson}

No time to loose!

Louis POV
*landing in Doncaster*

He said yes! As soon as we landed I raced off, grabbing my things and got in our van. 'well someone is in a hurry to see our new flat...' Niall said as he got in next to me. 'yeah, so much of a hurry, that he forgot that he was the one driving...' teased Harry, as he got in the passenger seat. 'oh...shit, let's go then!' I said getting back out the van and getting in the drivers seat.

They barely had enough time to buckle up before I slammed down on he gas pedal. 'woah! Cool your shits man!' screamed Zayn as he grabbed Liam for dear life.

We made it to our new flat. And I raced to claim the biggest room as mine. I've got to hurry up! School doesn't start for another hour! I'll probably make it by the skin of my teeth!

'awe Lou! No fair!' poured Harry, he then shrugged and took the second biggest room. Niall took the second to last room leaving Liam and Zayn to be bunk buddies. I ran out the flat, if memory serves me right, Amanda's house is only 7 houses down the street. If I keep running, I'll make it in 15 minutes...10 in the least.

Exactly 12 minutes later, I stop at her front door, catching my breath, and smiling like an idiot because I had 45 minutes to spare. I knock on her door and look down at my feet as I hear her sweet voice coming towards the door.

when she opened it, all I could see was the tip of her green converse shoes touching my red ones...THIS. seeing her in front of me, I'd the best birthday gift that I could ever ask for!

'louis!' she asked, slightly unsure. I looked up to see her flawless face, in complete and utter shock. So I smile shyly....

'Hey Mandy....'

Notes

Hey! It's Chanel! Sorry it's a little short, it's like 6am and I'm still not tired but my hand hurts from writing and helping my mum with chores....so guess what?! My bf Tyler is finally comming to see me! After 3 and 1/2 months up in NY with his band, he's coming in a week, and I'm sooo nervous! Like what if I end up looking like crap when he comes? (not that I dont, i look like crap everyday) but yeah...vote, comment, subscribe :) you guys are awesome!

stay true to only you~Chanelxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Comments

@Dani_Stypayhorlikson
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@tommos_carrotling
No thank you
@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Thank you so much!

@tommos_carrotling
Yup I'll read it no problem :)
@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Just making sure... can u read my fanfic please? It's my first one and I want some feedback on it... Hate is something I can take.. its on my profile...