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@Dani_Stypayhorlikson
what for?

YourGirlSusan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@tommos_carrotling
No thank you

Dani_Stypayhorlikson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Thank you so much!

YourGirlSusan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@tommos_carrotling
Yup I'll read it no problem :)

Dani_Stypayhorlikson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Just making sure... can u read my fanfic please? It's my first one and I want some feedback on it... Hate is something I can take.. its on my profile...

YourGirlSusan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@tommos_carrotling
No not at all

Dani_Stypayhorlikson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@Dani_Stypayhorlikson

I hope you don't think I was sending hate because I really do love this fanfic... a lot actually... You should keep writing...

YourGirlSusan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

@tommos_carrotling
Oh it's okay I really appreciate that you read the fanfic :D

Dani_Stypayhorlikson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

This is really good.... but I think that the beginninng was just a bit rushed... not trying to say I dont like it.. I do but its just kinda rushed into

YourGirlSusan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/9/13

Please update!!!!

imadirectioner_13 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
8/3/13

@Karina Tomlinson
Thanks :{)

Dani_Stypayhorlikson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/14/13

this chapter is soo good! Anyway, plz update!