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Loved you first...{Louis Tomlinson}

They're hotties

Amanda's POV

We got out of his car I was so excited louis on the other hand didn't. I hope I looked good cause I don't know. Louis unlocked the door and went in then yelled for them to come. In a second harry,Niall,Liam,and zayn came out. If you were wondering yes I do know about one direction I just don't talk about them a lot. They all just kept looking at me and to be honest it was kinda awkward. I was waiting for louis to introduce them but I guess he didn't want to. I finally gathered enough courage and introduced myself.

" Hi my name is Amanda "

" Hi I'm harry " said harry obviously.

" I know who you are silly " I said. A little bit too childishly if I say so myself.

" oh well great we don't have to introduce ourselves " said Niall.

" Niall " warned Liam.

" It's rude not to introduce yourself "

" K fine, hi I'm Niall " he said.

Hmm louis hasn't said anything that's weird he always has something to say. I better ask if he's okay because if he doesn't talk it's serious.

" Are you okay?" I asked louis.

" Yeah I'm fine don't worry " he said.

" K " I answered.

Then I finished introducing myself, I can't help but think that louis isn't happy with me meeting them. Then again he was the one that asked me if I wanted to meet them. I frown at that thought louis seemed to notice that and asked what was wrong.

" you're what's wrong " I answered him.

" Me?" He repeated.

" Yes you who else " I sarcastically answered.

" What did I do?" He asked.

" Nothing, but why are you not happy about me meeting the boys?"

" I'm not bothered by it, what are you talking about?"

" You know what forget it "

There is no point in talking to him if he's going to act dumb. We will talk about this later we he drops me off at home.
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We spent the afternoon watching tv, eating, and talking. It was finally time for louis to take me home I've been waiting to talk to him. I say bye to the boys and we leave.

Niall's POV

She's beautiful I can't even describe how beautiful she is. She also has an amazing personality she's funny, sweet, caring, and amazing. I could tell something has bothering her though I just don't know what.

Zayn's POV

She's pretty but nothing compared to Perrie. She's nice and I can tell that Niall has a little crush on her. Something was bothering her maybe she didn't like us or something.

Liam's POV

Amanda is a nice girl she's sweet and innocent. I kinda think Niall likes her I think everyone noticed except louis he was distracted today he barely said a word. I think Amanda or "Mandy" as louis calls her noticed this cause she looked worried.

Harry's POV

Mandy's a nice girl I can tell why louis is her friend. I think Niall has a crush on her. I also noticed as louis' bestfriend that he wasn't talking a lot which worried me. I think Amanda noticed this too and if she's as close to him as me she should know that that's not right.

Amanda's POV

We finally arrived at my house I offered louis to come in,he accepted. I was finally gonna ask him why he was acting weird all afternoon. I told him to wait for me while I got changed. I changed into this http://www.polyvore.com/untitled_37/set?id=94849269 and went downstairs. As we sat down on the sofa I was gonna ask him what I wanted to ask all day when my dad got home and started to scream for me to go help him with something. Louis said that he should go and went home leaving me with a lot of questions.

Louis' POV

I knew she wanted to ask me what was wrong but I couldn't tell her why. She was about to ask the question when her dad came home I mentally thanked him. I took that as an opportunity to go home. I told her that I was gonna see her tomorrow and went home.

Notes

What do you think and please comment your opinion. Well bye mwahh love you guys.

P.S. sorry for not updating in such a long time so sorry again.

Comments

@Dani_Stypayhorlikson
what for?
@tommos_carrotling
No thank you
@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Thank you so much!

@tommos_carrotling
Yup I'll read it no problem :)
@Dani_Stypayhorlikson Just making sure... can u read my fanfic please? It's my first one and I want some feedback on it... Hate is something I can take.. its on my profile...