The Slut
Its me The new Author
Ok Hey guys. Im Alyssa and I'm going to take on this story and try to keep it going. Umm... i dont really know what else to say besides give me feedback. I love reading the comments and seeing what guys like and dont like. Right now I'm writing another story "5 guys, 1 girl" so please be patient with me and dont beat up if i dont update every day. So um... ya. just wanted to introduce myself. Ill start working on the next chapter. :)
I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.
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