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The Slut

Chapter 37

NIALL's POV

Zayn, Louis, and I stand in Liam's room. He's in a comma. The car hit him on his side. The driver was drunk, he died. It's sucks how Liam and Sky won't get any justice but it's kinda good because now the guy won't ever be able to hurt someone under the influence.

Harry walks in and his shirt is soaked. We all jump to our feet.

Louis runs to his side, "What's wrong Harry?"

"The baby didn't make it," he whispers. He starts to cry all over agin. Zayn runs over to him and pulls him into a hug. I don't agree with what Sky and Harry did to Sammy but I would have never wished for something like this to happen to them. I decide to go give him my condolences. I push Zayn off of him. I grab Harry and give him a huge hug.

"I'm so sorry mate. I didn't agree with the choice that you and Sky made but I hope you understand that I would have never happen this would happen to you guys. I love you man," I whisper into his ear.

"Thanks man, love you too," he whispers into my ear.

He let's go of me and makes his way over to Liam. He grabs his hand and cries some more. He leans over to Liam's ear and whispers something. I don't know what he said, though.

Comments

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@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
5/5/14

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
4/23/14