The Slut
Chapter 4
" Hello earth to Sky are you there???!!"
" Sorry. What were you saying?" I said as Sammy pulled me out of my thoughts. We were currently at the mall and all I could think about is what me and Harry did this morning. God only knows what this boy does to me.
"I was saying that tomorrow nigh after work we could go see a movie. Maybe The Conjuring or something I heard its a true story?"
"Oh. Yeah I would love too."
"Great. Would it be ok if I bring Harry too?" She asked.
Wow me and Harry sitting next to each other in the dark. That's going to he fun.
"Yeah I don't care." I replied imagining all the things that could happen in the dark.
"Great. So I was thinking w......" She stopped and I stared at her. She was looking at something behind me so I turned around an so him.
Chris.
He was leaning against wall with his hands wrapped around a tall brunette and was kissing her. I couldn't stop staring. I felt tears start to form and I quickly looked away to spot the bathroom sign. I ran off to that direction storming inside a stall to grab to toilet paper. I walked to counter and gently started to wipe the tears under my eyes, making sure my makeup stayed intact. Sammy rushed and immediately started rubbing my back.
"Sky it's ok don't cry. Chris is a fucking prick and I bet you he's going to get fucking AIDS or HIV if he fucks that slutty bitch!" She said causing me to laugh.
" I know it's just that we barley broke up last night an he already has his arms wrapped around another girl. "
"We'll if it makes you feel any better she turned around and her face looks like a dog took a shit all over it!" I started laughing when she said that and soon she joined in until our stomaches started to hurt.
"Thanks Sammy you always know what to say to make me feel better."
" Well of course I do your my bitch I have to know." I smiled before I turned around and gave her hug. If she only know what I was doing with her boyfriend.
" Sorry. What were you saying?" I said as Sammy pulled me out of my thoughts. We were currently at the mall and all I could think about is what me and Harry did this morning. God only knows what this boy does to me.
"I was saying that tomorrow nigh after work we could go see a movie. Maybe The Conjuring or something I heard its a true story?"
"Oh. Yeah I would love too."
"Great. Would it be ok if I bring Harry too?" She asked.
Wow me and Harry sitting next to each other in the dark. That's going to he fun.
"Yeah I don't care." I replied imagining all the things that could happen in the dark.
"Great. So I was thinking w......" She stopped and I stared at her. She was looking at something behind me so I turned around an so him.
Chris.
He was leaning against wall with his hands wrapped around a tall brunette and was kissing her. I couldn't stop staring. I felt tears start to form and I quickly looked away to spot the bathroom sign. I ran off to that direction storming inside a stall to grab to toilet paper. I walked to counter and gently started to wipe the tears under my eyes, making sure my makeup stayed intact. Sammy rushed and immediately started rubbing my back.
"Sky it's ok don't cry. Chris is a fucking prick and I bet you he's going to get fucking AIDS or HIV if he fucks that slutty bitch!" She said causing me to laugh.
" I know it's just that we barley broke up last night an he already has his arms wrapped around another girl. "
"We'll if it makes you feel any better she turned around and her face looks like a dog took a shit all over it!" I started laughing when she said that and soon she joined in until our stomaches started to hurt.
"Thanks Sammy you always know what to say to make me feel better."
" Well of course I do your my bitch I have to know." I smiled before I turned around and gave her hug. If she only know what I was doing with her boyfriend.
I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.
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