The Slut
Chapter 26
ZAYN's POV
I put my smoke out and start walking around.
"SKY!!! SKKKYYYY WHERE ARE YOOOUUU???!!!" I yell into the night.
Nothing.
I pull out my phone and turn on the flashlight. I start to walk around.
" SKYYYY!!!!!!" I yell again. Nothing but echoes.
I flash the light on the ground trying to see if maybe she left footprints into the grass or something.
Her phone.
I run back into the ball room. The guys are finishing up the Father Daughter dance.
" 'Cause it's you, oh it's you. It's you they add up toooo. And I'm in love with you. And all these little things," Harry finishes his solo. Once they all sing together I run over to Harry and show him Sky's phone. I whisper in his er that I couldnt find her. His eyes shot wide open.
He hopped off his stool and came running outside with me.
" SKKKKYYYYY!!!!!" He yelled. He started running around the building yelling her name.
After a couple of minutes the rest of the guys came running out.
" What's going on?" Niall asks.
" Sky's missing," I say.
Harry collapses onto me, crying.
" Harry it's alright. She's gonna be ok. She probably took a walk," Liam says.
" NO SHE DIDNT!!! NIT WITHOUT TELLING US!" Harry yells.
" She was on the phone with someone so he probably needed to walk around for a bit," Louis whispers, trying not to anger him.
" What if something happened to her?" Harry cries into Louis' chest.
I put my smoke out and start walking around.
"SKY!!! SKKKYYYY WHERE ARE YOOOUUU???!!!" I yell into the night.
Nothing.
I pull out my phone and turn on the flashlight. I start to walk around.
" SKYYYY!!!!!!" I yell again. Nothing but echoes.
I flash the light on the ground trying to see if maybe she left footprints into the grass or something.
Her phone.
I run back into the ball room. The guys are finishing up the Father Daughter dance.
" 'Cause it's you, oh it's you. It's you they add up toooo. And I'm in love with you. And all these little things," Harry finishes his solo. Once they all sing together I run over to Harry and show him Sky's phone. I whisper in his er that I couldnt find her. His eyes shot wide open.
He hopped off his stool and came running outside with me.
" SKKKKYYYYY!!!!!" He yelled. He started running around the building yelling her name.
After a couple of minutes the rest of the guys came running out.
" What's going on?" Niall asks.
" Sky's missing," I say.
Harry collapses onto me, crying.
" Harry it's alright. She's gonna be ok. She probably took a walk," Liam says.
" NO SHE DIDNT!!! NIT WITHOUT TELLING US!" Harry yells.
" She was on the phone with someone so he probably needed to walk around for a bit," Louis whispers, trying not to anger him.
" What if something happened to her?" Harry cries into Louis' chest.
I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.
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