The Slut
Chapter 16
Harry's POV
" Ok so no one finds out about the baby ok! Tonight lets just have fun. Remember no drinking and take it easy," i remind Sky as we approach the hotel.
" I know Harry. What are we gonna tell the guys? What are we going to tell Sammy?" Sky questions as we pull up to the hotel.
" For now... Nothing. We'll think of that later," i reply. I tub off the car and look at her.
" Sky, we really need to to keep this a secret for now," she nods her head. I quickly run over to her door and open it for her. She smiles and we head up to the elevator.
Louis' POV
" Where the bloody hell were you?!" I shout as Harry walks through our door.
" I went out with Sky for a minute," he says dully.
" Really Harry? After everything. Why?" I snap.
" Dont worry about it Louis. It's none if your fucking business!!" He yells back.
" What ever Harry. Ask one of the other guys to Help you rehearse. Im done with your bullshit!" I yell as i grab my keys and leave our room. Hes always doing something wrong.
HARRY's POV
Louis leaves in a bad mood. I wish he'd understand.
My starts buzzing uncontrollably in my pocket.
Its Sammy.
" hey babe." Sammy says
"eh hey. Whats up?"
" oh nothing. I thought you should know that the doctors released me. I had a minor concussion. Nothing too serious."
" Shut up. It was more than a baby concussion." I laugh.
" Not really Hair." I hate it when she calls me that,
" So ehhh.... I gotta get going. We have to rehearse for the party tonight." I say pacing around the hotel room.
" Alright, well call me when you can. Love you, bye baby.
" Ya. Bye." I quickly hang up.
Sammy's POV
He didnt say "I love you" back.
what the fuck?! How much you want to bet its all Sky's fault. Shes such a bitch sometimes. Like shes my best friend and I love her but right now we aren't really on speaking terms. Why? I honestly dont even remember. All i know is it has somethin to do with Harry. Or Niall? Oh shit I forgot to call Niall back!!! Eh, if it was important he'd call me again.
" Ok so no one finds out about the baby ok! Tonight lets just have fun. Remember no drinking and take it easy," i remind Sky as we approach the hotel.
" I know Harry. What are we gonna tell the guys? What are we going to tell Sammy?" Sky questions as we pull up to the hotel.
" For now... Nothing. We'll think of that later," i reply. I tub off the car and look at her.
" Sky, we really need to to keep this a secret for now," she nods her head. I quickly run over to her door and open it for her. She smiles and we head up to the elevator.
Louis' POV
" Where the bloody hell were you?!" I shout as Harry walks through our door.
" I went out with Sky for a minute," he says dully.
" Really Harry? After everything. Why?" I snap.
" Dont worry about it Louis. It's none if your fucking business!!" He yells back.
" What ever Harry. Ask one of the other guys to Help you rehearse. Im done with your bullshit!" I yell as i grab my keys and leave our room. Hes always doing something wrong.
HARRY's POV
Louis leaves in a bad mood. I wish he'd understand.
My starts buzzing uncontrollably in my pocket.
Its Sammy.
" hey babe." Sammy says
"eh hey. Whats up?"
" oh nothing. I thought you should know that the doctors released me. I had a minor concussion. Nothing too serious."
" Shut up. It was more than a baby concussion." I laugh.
" Not really Hair." I hate it when she calls me that,
" So ehhh.... I gotta get going. We have to rehearse for the party tonight." I say pacing around the hotel room.
" Alright, well call me when you can. Love you, bye baby.
" Ya. Bye." I quickly hang up.
Sammy's POV
He didnt say "I love you" back.
what the fuck?! How much you want to bet its all Sky's fault. Shes such a bitch sometimes. Like shes my best friend and I love her but right now we aren't really on speaking terms. Why? I honestly dont even remember. All i know is it has somethin to do with Harry. Or Niall? Oh shit I forgot to call Niall back!!! Eh, if it was important he'd call me again.
Notes
Sorry its so lame. Its just i barely got any feedback. I was planning something big to happen at this larty but now im not sure.Should it be peaceful and fun? Or dramatic and sick?
How should Sammy find out about the baby? C'mon babes i need your feedback.
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