The Slut
Chapter 7
Sky's POV
"Harry?! Baby you awake?" I hear a female's voice yell.
"Harry wake up! Sammy is here." I shake him hard and throw him his boxers as i grab my clothes from the floor. So last night was crazy. Louis almost caught us making out and then after he left Harry and I had sex. We did it on the counter, the table, the couch, and we did it in his bed last. It was so good but so wrong. As soon as i hear footstep coming up the stairs i kiss Harry bye and hop out of the window. I climb down the fire escape and run as fast as i can towards the front door. I catch my breath and ring the door bell.
"Hey Sky. What are you doing here?" Louis answers the door.
"Who's that Lou?" Sammy calls from the top of the stairs.
"Sammy!!!" I shriek pretending to be surprised by seeing her.
"What're you doing here?" She hugs me.
"I came to check on Harry. Hes my best friend. I had to make sure it wasnt anything serious. How is he by the way?" I start makin my way upstairs.
"Hes feeling better. Just probably a bug." She shrugs.
"Sky!" Harry waves to me, acting like he was surprised to see me. Damn he was good at lying too. I gave him a quick hug and left the room.
"You leaving already?" Sammy calls out to me.
"Ya. I gotta get going. I umm have to be some where." I grab Harry's Keys and leave.
ME: Hey i took ur car.
I had to text him and let him know that i was leaving. That was close... Too close.
"Harry?! Baby you awake?" I hear a female's voice yell.
"Harry wake up! Sammy is here." I shake him hard and throw him his boxers as i grab my clothes from the floor. So last night was crazy. Louis almost caught us making out and then after he left Harry and I had sex. We did it on the counter, the table, the couch, and we did it in his bed last. It was so good but so wrong. As soon as i hear footstep coming up the stairs i kiss Harry bye and hop out of the window. I climb down the fire escape and run as fast as i can towards the front door. I catch my breath and ring the door bell.
"Hey Sky. What are you doing here?" Louis answers the door.
"Who's that Lou?" Sammy calls from the top of the stairs.
"Sammy!!!" I shriek pretending to be surprised by seeing her.
"What're you doing here?" She hugs me.
"I came to check on Harry. Hes my best friend. I had to make sure it wasnt anything serious. How is he by the way?" I start makin my way upstairs.
"Hes feeling better. Just probably a bug." She shrugs.
"Sky!" Harry waves to me, acting like he was surprised to see me. Damn he was good at lying too. I gave him a quick hug and left the room.
"You leaving already?" Sammy calls out to me.
"Ya. I gotta get going. I umm have to be some where." I grab Harry's Keys and leave.
ME: Hey i took ur car.
I had to text him and let him know that i was leaving. That was close... Too close.
I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.
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