The Slut
Chapter 1
Ring.... Ring..... Ring
"ugh what the fuck is that?"
" Oh sorry it's just my alarm clock."
" Alright" I thought to my self and was falling back to sleep when....
" Harry!!!!! What the fuck are you doing here????!!!"
I pulled out of the cover and stood to see that I was completely naked
" oh nonononono" I muttered as Harry got up where I could see that he was naked too!!!
Still looking at him and thought " damn this is not a bad view"
" Oh shit Sky what did we do last night!!"
I pulled out my disturbing but yet pleasurable thought and looked back to the last thing I remember
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I was in in the bathroom cleaning my face that had dark streaks of mascara running down the sides, cut to the fact that I was crying earlier over my break up with Chris, when I got a tex from Sammy asking if I was going to the party. After replying with I yes I pulled out me favorite black mini dress that stopped on my mid- thigh and quickly pulled it on adding my black ankle heel boots. I looked in the mirror and loved how the dress made my ass look look good and made my C- cup breast look like they were D- cups. I put some gel on my red velvet hair to make my natural curls stay in place, then grabbed my phone and purse and walked out the door to my black BMW.
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When I arrived at the party shortly after I walked up the steps inside and started looking for Sammy. I soon found her in the kitchen serving herself a cup of beer.
" I'm gonna need one of those"
" Oh her bitch, I didn't think you were gonna come after what that dickhead did to you" she said before handing me my drink.
"Yeah I wasn't sure either, but I want to just get m mind off of him."
" Oh yeah, and how do you plan on accomplishing that?"giving me a look that told me she already knew my answer and is amused by it
" Well first I'm going to get drunk and then I'm going to have loud, hot sex with random hot guy"
She laughed " ok well good luck with that, and could you do me a favor"
" yeah sure what?"
" Can you look for Harry for me, I haven't seen him all night and I want to have loud, hot sex but with my hot guy"
" yeah alright"
She turned and disappeared out the kitchen where I stood there not knowing that in less than and hour I'm going to become the biggest bitch she has ever known.
"ugh what the fuck is that?"
" Oh sorry it's just my alarm clock."
" Alright" I thought to my self and was falling back to sleep when....
" Harry!!!!! What the fuck are you doing here????!!!"
I pulled out of the cover and stood to see that I was completely naked
" oh nonononono" I muttered as Harry got up where I could see that he was naked too!!!
Still looking at him and thought " damn this is not a bad view"
" Oh shit Sky what did we do last night!!"
I pulled out my disturbing but yet pleasurable thought and looked back to the last thing I remember
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I was in in the bathroom cleaning my face that had dark streaks of mascara running down the sides, cut to the fact that I was crying earlier over my break up with Chris, when I got a tex from Sammy asking if I was going to the party. After replying with I yes I pulled out me favorite black mini dress that stopped on my mid- thigh and quickly pulled it on adding my black ankle heel boots. I looked in the mirror and loved how the dress made my ass look look good and made my C- cup breast look like they were D- cups. I put some gel on my red velvet hair to make my natural curls stay in place, then grabbed my phone and purse and walked out the door to my black BMW.
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When I arrived at the party shortly after I walked up the steps inside and started looking for Sammy. I soon found her in the kitchen serving herself a cup of beer.
" I'm gonna need one of those"
" Oh her bitch, I didn't think you were gonna come after what that dickhead did to you" she said before handing me my drink.
"Yeah I wasn't sure either, but I want to just get m mind off of him."
" Oh yeah, and how do you plan on accomplishing that?"giving me a look that told me she already knew my answer and is amused by it
" Well first I'm going to get drunk and then I'm going to have loud, hot sex with random hot guy"
She laughed " ok well good luck with that, and could you do me a favor"
" yeah sure what?"
" Can you look for Harry for me, I haven't seen him all night and I want to have loud, hot sex but with my hot guy"
" yeah alright"
She turned and disappeared out the kitchen where I stood there not knowing that in less than and hour I'm going to become the biggest bitch she has ever known.
I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.
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