Cambridge (Part III) - Comments, page 4

Ahhhhhh I'm dying to know what happened! And I'm glad to see Harry at least pausing to consider that Rachel and Louis could be good for each other. Also, Delia's heart might be in the right place but I think she still has a longgggg way to go to redeeming herself. Good update! :)

@Niall's_Strawberry_Red
Yeah that’s tough. Honestly maybe just try to find a new co-author? I’ve tried it in the past and it usually works well as long as you find someone who is willing to work with who the character already is and continue with the story.

@ontheedge
Thanks so much for the comment! Yeah it can be difficult when you lose co authors! Skylar was such a major part of the story but her author isn’t around anymore, so we’re unsure of what to do regarding her!

Definitely continue this! I know it's hard especially when losing co-authors but this story is good! And I really want Harry to have a chance especially since Skylar and Luke's relationship is so toxic.

@impostersyndrome5 @LizzyM101
Yeah I’m with you guys. I definitely want Rachel and Louis back together, there’s no way she should forgive Ashton, at least not for a while.

Sounds so weird but honestly I’d love to see Louis and Harry having a heart to heart, even if it was a bit awkward. If Louis told Harry how much he really cared about Rachel, I’m sure he could give him some advice on how to win her back.

@Niall's_Strawberry_Red
Yeah Rachel shouldn't forgive Ashton right now. Ashton knew how Louis hurt Rachel the first time and did the exact same thing to her but worst because it was in the confinds of a relationship. Yes I would like Louis to make a possible move but only if he has feelings for Rachel if not. Than have a slow burn of feelings pogress.

@PorcelainHeartdrops
@Niall's_Strawberry_Red
Even tho what Ashton did is a little like what Louis did, it isn't the same. Rachel and Louis were doing some kind of in-between thing, and Rachel and Ashton were actually full-on dating. I think Rachel and Louis are in a good place now with being honest with each other and Harry knowing they both have/had feelings for the other so they should def get together soon! :)

@MoonlitRain
Ahaha, yeah Rachel & Louis have stayed pretty good friends throughout the series so far, I’m glad you enjoy that aspect of the relationship too

@Niall's_Strawberry_Red
Definitely, but I mind of like the whole slow burn thing. I’d love to see them just hang out a lot as friends and then Rachel realised she’s falling back in love with him!!

@LizzyM101
Thanks so much for commenting! So you don’t think Rachel should forgive Ashton right now, but maybe in the future? And what would you like to see in store for Rachel and Louis? Love hearing the readers opinions

Rachel shouldn't forgive Ashton at the moment but Louis should make a move on Rachel. I would love to see them again.

@impostersyndrome5
@PorcelainHeartdrops
@MoonlitRain

thanks so much for commenting guys! So you all want Rachel and Louis to end up together then?

@impostersyndrome5
I’m 100% with you, I don’t care if Ashton claims to love Rachel, he hurt her unforgivably and she shouldn’t get back with him, under any circumstances.

Rachel and Louis both messed up, but have forgiven each other. They obviously have an attraction, and are being mature and open with each other. They need to be together. Rachel didn't do anything to Ashton and he hurt her in unacceptable way. She should forgive but never forget. Ashton and Delia deserve each other, honestly.

@LizzyM101 @impostersyndrome5
Omg yessssss Rachel has to get back with Louis ❤️

@impostersyndrome5
@UnHombreAsi
@PorcelainHeartdrops

Thanks so much for commenting! Really appreciate the support! If you guys have any ideas/criticism, please do comment again!

Do continue,

Definitely should continue! I love Rachel, but Delia’s kind of right (still don’t think rachel should forgive her), aside from sleeping with eleanor, Louis was the committed one. Rachel was spending all her time with Ashton and she did sleep at his place. Maybe now Rachel will apologise and her and Louis can get back together.

You should continue it, especially if Louis and Rachel end up together! :)

Omg I'm binge reading, don't want it to end!!