History|N.H| - Comments, page 2

@xo_caitlin_xo
Some pregnancies don't always have symptoms, I've had two children. My first was a breeze, I didn't even know I was pregnant until three months gone - no cravings, no morning sickness etc I felt great! My second pregnancy was awful, throwing up all the time, couldn't eat etc.. they were so different!
So please understand that your pregnancy for your character is absolutely fine. No pregnancy is the same. ;)

Don't worry too much about mistakes - we all do it when writing. Over time, we get better as we write.I like the idea you have and you're writing is fine.

It's hard writing on here as we all have different taste in stories, but keep the hard work up! I know it's demanding xx

I like the name Claire :)

@Maya Collins
No no it's fine I understand. I like criticism like that to make my stories better!

@xo_caitlin_xo
IM JUST SORRY FO BEING RUDE .I REALLY DO LIKE THE STORY THOUGH.I GAVE IT A GOOD RATING

@Maya Collins
Lol I was so bombard with comments! But thank you for having the time to read my story and telling me what you think. I honestly don't know a lot about pregnancy because I myself am only 16 and they don't teach us about it really tbh. But despite my chapters being short us because i have very little time to write anymore because of school but I'm trying and I will keep your ideas in mind when I write the next chapter!

and i hope you dont get mad at me for this its just that my mum is a published writer and i have been writing my whole live and my mum has been teaching on how to wright a good story and everything that i need to know to become a writer so i just thought that you would want to know all of the flaws of the story

and the things you write like what they say it doesn't really sound like what people would say so try to make it realistic

im so sorry but there is one more thing.in chapter nine it says that she is 6 months along but in chapter ten it says that she is 5 months along and in the begining of chapter ten it doesn't say that it will be porposly going back a month so you obviously made a mistake and i think you should read over your chapters so that you know that there is nothing wrong

ok one more thing.she is completely off by the picture of liv preganet .she said that she is 6 months preganet but that picture is of a gurl who is like 2 months preganet.and i know bc i have three sister and they have all been preagnet once except one and she has been pregnat 2 and my older brother has had 3 kids so i am 100 percent sure.and her finding out that she is preagnat at 2 months is so wrong.she would already be showing like the picture you put on in the begining of the nine chapter thats like 2 months pregnat so she would know.and she would be throwing up and having cravings by 2 months so the whole pregnat thing is off

ok not to be rude but the chapters are really short and there is like no details. im only onchapter nine but so far i like it but its not the best

@xo_caitlin_xo
LOVE YOU TOO BUT CALL ME WHEN NIALL AND SHAWN PERFORM CAUSE I WANT TO HEAR THEM

Oh my thank you for not killing the baby I thought I would've cried this was an great update!!

@i_love_lou
JUST BECAUSE I MIGHT SEE NIALL AT JINGLE BALL DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE YOU HATE YOU BITCH!!!! I'M GOING TO SEE HIM WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT AND MY BOYFRIEND SHAWN MENDES! JK YOU'RE NOT A BITCH LOVE YOU HAM!!!<3<3<3

So you do have a heart. Who would have thought

@xo_caitlin_xo
I know what is going to happen unfortanely. But I love the story :)

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@i_love_lou
I mostly will update tonight so wait and see!!

PLEASE NO! DX NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

YOU ASSHOLE I HATE YOU CAITLIN I SWEAR TO JESUS CHRIST YOU MADE HER BABY DIE I HATE YOU SO MUCH UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Omg if she's bleeding that means...
i can't even say it
I just hope she's okay

Update soon please!!