The Bachelorette - Comments, page 4

@Ayat
They are cute, aren't they? Next chaper will be up next week!

Ohhh I totally hope Louis wins! Him and Clara are so cute together!

So. Cute. Omg Can't wait for more!!!!!

@Allie Miller
I loved writing the date! Oh, thank you, that means the world to me, thank you, thank you!! xx

Omg such a cute date.. This story is so great I can't get enough.. xx :)

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I wanted to make it clear that kissing early is what happens in the actual shows, that's why I said it in the end notes :P Louis and Clara do have a connection (hence the title of the chapter!) but the other boys will have their chance to forms relationships with her, don't worry!

Thank you, girl! I really appreciate it, more than you will ever know! :)) xx

I was about to ask if kissing so early on in this type of show is normal but I guess so. :p I def think she has something special with Louis even from the very first time they saw each other. At this point, the other guys need to step it up if they want to beat Louis.

Dont feel pressured to update, we all understand. ❤

@LivinLikeLarry
There will be many more dates to come!! xx

Aww that date was so cute!! Cant wait to read the rest of them!

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I couldn't. The thought never crossed my mind!

That means the world to me! Thank you so much! I would hug you right now if I could! :)) xx

@blankspace1
Haha good thing you didn't get rid of him. I would have cried.

You're welcome! I care a lot about my online friends just like I do with my real ones. I am no stranger to deaths in the family so I know it's not easy to say goodbye. Don't worry if you don't feel like updating, right now family is more important. :)

@MoonlightHoran
Thank you! That's so sweet of you to say! Ly too :)) xx

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I had a feeling a reader or two, if not more, would get that feeling but I didn't want to bring up that memory in the fandom so I kept him in the competition! I've always found Zayn sort of mysterious, like Clara thinks, and he's a very interesting artist, to me anyway, so she wanted to get to know him more and that's why she put him through! Not telling who's going on the first date! I'm tempted because I'm writing it right now, lol!

Thank you, girl! To have people I've never met be so kind (like you!) and think of me during this time is so incredible! Lots of love from me! xx

im so sorry abt ur granddad.. i ost a great uncle last year and i know how it feels :'( stay strong bby
i love this story
all ur stories are perfect
ly xx

Omg for a second there I thought she wasn't going to choose Zayn and flashbacks of him leaving 1D suddenly came back. lol I loved the update, can't wait for first dates! I choose Niall for the first date but I might be biased. :p

Also, again I'm sorry for your loss and I'll be thinking about you on Monday for your final goodbye to your grandfather.

@LivinLikeLarry
Thank you! Already writing the next chapter :)) xx

Great update!!!! Cant wait to see who goes oj the first one on one date!!!!!

@Kath0183
:)) Thank you! xx

Great update!!

@Allie Miller
Thank you! And tell me about it! :D xx