Login with:

Facebook
Twitter
Tumblr
Google
Yahoo
Aol.
Mibba

Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.

I Just Want You - Comments, page 2

Homepage › Stories › I Just Want You › Comments

You made Harry out to be someone he is NOT! He definitely would not objectify a woman like that, and he would not say fuck and baby girl as much as he does in your story. And you made Kenzie call him Hazza WAY too much. Like, once in a while is fine but it seemed like every other word that she said was Hazza. You also wrote that they had a lot of good times other than just sex, why did you write about sex so much and not about the fun they had together. Yes, at first the sex scenes were pretty good but then they just got super boring. I am positive almost no one can see Harry doing and saying the things he does in this story because it is just so unrealistic. To be honest you made this story seem like a way worse version of 50 Shades of Grey.

jenessaskjerly jenessaskjerly
12/13/15

@belleblue
true

mumblings mumblings
11/18/15

@mumblings

Dirty Harry is always the best Harry, lol! <3

@mumblings

belleblue belleblue
11/17/15

Harry just got super dirty in that last chapter. lol.

mumblings mumblings
11/16/15

@Mrs.Calum Horan

Aww, thanks!! I'm so glad you like it!! I just updated--let me know what you think! :)

belleblue belleblue
11/12/15

I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more :)

Mrs.Calum Horan Mrs.Calum Horan
11/11/15

I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more :)

Mrs.Calum Horan Mrs.Calum Horan
11/11/15

@stylesgirl41

Thank you!! I hope you liked last nights chap...hoping to post another soon!

belleblue belleblue
10/20/15

@fifirose

Awesome!! I'm glad you like it!! :)

belleblue belleblue
10/20/15

when i saw you were the author i just knew this was going to be great. i read every word and was not at all dissapointed.

cocopops cocopops @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/19/15

Love the new chapter. Cannot wait for the next installment!!!!!!

stylesgirl41 stylesgirl41
10/17/15

@CiaoNiccie

Hey lady, miss you too!!! My computer has been broken but I FINALLY got it back and can update. Writing with pen and paper has been no fun. This story came out of nowhere--I should have been working on Blue, but then I come up with this one. Kind of a different angle, but I think Laney and Kenzie would be awesome friends.

If anything, I wish I got more comments. I like hearing what people think!!

belleblue belleblue
10/14/15

@stylesgirl41

That's awesome!!! Blue is my favorite, but I'm loving this one too. My computer has been broken but I am finally able to update now that it's fixed. I hope you like the next chapters!

belleblue belleblue
10/14/15

Love it. You are an amazing writer. I'm currently reading Blue also!

stylesgirl41 stylesgirl41
9/26/15

Aren't you a creative sneaky one. I like how your female characters are pretty eccentric. So glad to see your writing game strong too! Miss ya friend! And great work, per usual. I wish you'd get more recognition (heck, a few writers here). You deserve it! Xoxo

CiaoNiccie CiaoNiccie
9/25/15