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Story Reviews - Comments, page 7
@DrowningButBreathing
Like you made Niall like food extremely.
Or those stories where Louis has an extreme obsession with carrots (thank god you didn't put that though
I'm sure he likes food but not that much lol ;)
Other than those small things I pointed out your story is excellent! keep writing!
@JordynHoran
Yep, that's exactly what's happening. :P
So change the too much spacing and the not enough spacing, gotcha. I'll try to even them out :)
@One_Direction_Infection
Np that's what I'm here for!
I noticed you had different authors on your story so I think one person is adding a lot of spaces and then the other person didn't any spacing, but I think that's what's happening not anyone's POV in particular. =D
@JordynHoran
Thanks! :)
Is it Racheal's Pov that you're talking about? With all the spaces?
And Skylar's Pov with no spaces?
I'll definitely add more emotions, thanks for pointing that out
I Don't Care What You Think
http://www.niallhoranfanfiction.com/Story/50654/I-Dont-Care-What-You-Think/
Can you please review my stories: "Love Me For Me", "You Found Me", "Change Your Life", and "Here We Go". If you don't have time to review them all, I would really appreciate it if you reviewed the first one. Thank you!
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