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@XOXOH
Me either! I really want your outlook after it's done. Your "steamy" chapters are really good!
Lol I actually got pinched by a crab last summer, and reacted very similar. I've got a longer chapter, but it needs a ton of editing, hopefully it'll be ready in a few days!
I love Truuuu major girl crush I love that she doesn't give in so easily! And is it weird that I loved how you described the crab? That part was so cute! She knows how to handle Harry I'm loving this story and you for writing it!!!❤️❤️❤️ And thank you so much your writing is golden itself and I can tell this story will be a popular force to be reckoned with as you continue keep it up love!!! Xx
@XOXOH
I love Tru too! I was so worried about posting this story! I've never showed any of my writing to anyone other than assignments, and I sent you the first chapter before posting! I love, LOVE getting your comments! BTW I think you got me addicted to another one of your stories (The Resistance!). Next chapter should be up soon... <3
I just Died I just Died I love Tru! I loved Everything about this chapter I'm so happy she begged Harry lol They're perfect and no, I don't think Tru went to far with her dad to answer your question from last chapter. He was being an ass Love the update and thank you for posting it <3
We'll find out soon. It's going to get interesting next few chapters, we're find out the reason she joined the Marines, and Connor's views on it!
I kive yhat she doesnt take shit from anyone I love how strong she is and yessss Im loving Harry in this!!! Its just so well written and intriguing. I dont know if she kisses him though. Half of me says she does but half of me say wait, she's too sassy to just let it happen that way lol I cabt wait to read more!!!
OH MY GOD this chapter! I was already sucked in by the first one but now I'm legit full on addicted and waiting for more. Your writing and grammar is amazing and I can already tell that this story is going to be a huge hit! I can't wait until it takes off (because it will soon) to see all of the subs and votes you get! You're going to be quite the author yourself, and I'll be first in line to buy one of your books! ;) :* Thank you for the shout out, but you definitely have one coming in my upcoming chapter! I love it and love you! Xx
Please update!
3/24/14