Keeping Hope - Comments, page 4

perrie and el omg so sad

I think it was Tyler's brother who put it in Els locker

Wow such an intense story you're such an amazing writer great story first time reading it and im amazes

woahhhh,i hate tyler so much for doing that to hope!! and she died when she was what 15? so young:( i suspect that it was maybe jen or Tyler's brother who put the diary in el's locker..

Omgggg. you're a genius!!! Everything is just so well planned out and Omgg it's just perfff!!!

The way you've planned this is brilliant. Can't wait to see how the truth to come out. Only criticism I have is some of the spelling and punctuation however it is still easy to see what you mean. I'm hooked. Please update soon!

sux that harry didn't hit back.. i just i want niall to know that harry could've easily knocked him out if he wanted to..

Hopes diary? Holy shit who put it there......I hope Harry and Emma decide to date bc they r SOO cute together and Zayn and Liam in this story need to fuck off coz they're not very nice

@raylee
well that sucks..bc i have an acc on harrystylesfanfic+niallhoranfanfic+ondirectionfanfic+5sosfanfic and they're all partnered.. i think, and i read fanfics on all 4 of em.but yeah..there's nothing we can do about it

@crushingonniall
I know, they have the site set in a way, that only if you log on to the site I posted the story in, it will notify you.. So if you log into onedirection.com you will get notified..

I'm not getting any notifications!! i never know if a ff has been updated if i don't check for myself!! and it's been happening a few days now!,.

@crushingonniall
np. Just here to help :P

@GothikVampiress
@raylee oooh..cuz i was thinking something else.thanks for telling me btw :)x

@crushingonniall
@GothikVampiress is right.. She didn't try to push her down, it just happened, when you have a seizure you're not aware of what you're doing..

@crushingonniall
I'm thinking probably to catch a breath, or something with the seizure it made her forget for a moments and reflexes occured to where survival of the fitest instincts came in. That's what I think mate :)

there's something i don't get..so her mum pushed her down?...

That's so sad about her mum ;( but they are going on a date yes finally!

Omgggg!!!!!! They kissed!!!!!! Omggg!!!!!!!! Wooooo

my mom thinks I'm crazy hahahaaaaa I've been smiling like a creep when i was reading the last part!!

He kissed her!!!!!! Yay finally