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The mentally brave ( Editing) - Comments, page 3
@raylee
No problem love :)
So I woke up and was extremely bored so I went on HarryStylesFanfiction and" The mentally brave " had just been updated and I was like "I am going to read the first chapter to see if it is good" Then I read the first chap and I was like OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING! So I kept reading it until I finished and I could not resist commenting how amazing it it.
* gets worked up* Seriously, If you change the names of the characters SEND IT TO AN PUBLISHER AND GET IT PUBLISHED!!!
*Calms down*
This story is the best story ever :)
@harrystylesisamaz
Oh my gosh!thank you so much! This is the best thing anyone has ever written to me! You just made my day! Thank you xx
This story is the best fanfic ever.
It's plot is very well thought out and it's characters are very well developed.
If you changed the names of the people and published it, i think we have the new divergent. Keep it up!
She said take natalie and leave so it could raise suspicion and possibly get harry to see that his father is not good and then she can go to foster or find her fatherr and then come back to get harry OR lizzie tells harry dramatically and threathens to leace and harry gets upset and make his dad apologize to her and his dad gets mad that he doesnt have harry the way he thought and he loses control and lizzie reads his mind in that momwnt and repeats everything she hears lol I am just spitballing ideas here your story always gets me to be really creative check out my story test drive going to make a chat about you guys soon loland they argue again
oh my god i have a bad feeling about what's going to happen in the next chapter bc i think lizzie is going to do something stupid.
@niallerandhazza
Gosh! thank you so much! it makes me so so happy to know you guys read and enjoy my stories xx
Oh my gosh I started crying......... you are a really good writer and I REALLY like pandemonium too!!!!!
@crushingonniall
I know! I read your comment there! Thank you so much sweetie! It means the world to me! xx
i don't know what to say about this chapter it's so..so..i have no words..i almost cried:( it feels like I'm IN the fanfic..o.m.g and I've been reading pandemonium and i love!!it
Omg this chapter though!! I had to compose myself before being able to comment!!!! I was crying!!! But at the end I'm glad it was just a vision for now I guess but anyway please update soon!!!! Loved it!!!
you know..i thought that..u know zayn and perrie?....would kinda have something?...but i don't c that happening..and i really just wanr to know moreeeeeee about the other half of company x
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@harrystylesisamaz
Gosh! thank you!!! thank you thank you thank you =)))
4/29/14