Just Your Average Girl - Comments, page 11

its awesome.exited to read another chapter.plz upload it fast.<3<3<3

plz plz plz write more.i jst loved it can't wait to read it .lov u<3<3

So what do you want our story to be about?

@Dreamer123
Alright!! I am ready whenever you are! :D

@ILoveTheDirection
SWEET! Alright lets start ASAP!!

@Dreamer123
Oh hey girl hey! Haha
1. Thank you so much! Means a lot! :)
2. HECK YES I WOULD LOVE TO BE YOUR CO-AUTHOR! We could totally write the best story ever haha

Heeeeeeyyyyyyy Mormon girl! Remember me? ;) Anyway just wanted to say 2 things,
1. Love your story, UPDATE!!! :)
2. Do you want to be my co-author? I think we could write da best, clean, story eva!
let me know!
-Sarah (Dreamer123)

UPDDAAATTTTEEEEE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

Gawking over Gosling.. hell yeah! And the Niall introduction is one of the cutest things I've read. I haven't finished all the chapters yet, but I definitely will in the morning. This story is so sweet I'm loving it. Just thought you should know, keep up the good work xoxo ♡

@marie.eve07
Well thank you! I feel honored! :) and that actually isn't a bad idea.. I might use it!! :) thanks! And I will try to update either late tonight or tomorrow

It's the first fanfiction about Niall I'm ready, and to be honest, I really enjoy it!

So, you wanted ideas; I think I have one for you :)
You wrote they were going to get lunch after that. So during the lunch, maybe the group would split, like Ann, Olivia and Zayn go get there food, Liam, Louis and Harry do the same, and Niall and Maddy go get there food too. They remet to eat there food together. While getting there food, Maddy could open up to Niall, like I don't know, something that happenned in her life or somenthing. It could be Niall too. So anyways, I hope you'll update soon! :)

@Wildcat93
Aw thanks!! :) I will try I have to work at 11 so if I have time before I will

Love this story!! Makes me smile! Update again tonight, pleaseeee!

@MaddyLovesTheDirection
you're welcome

@thismariahisawesome
Oh yeah, thanks for pointing that out! Haha I was going to change it to another ride and the toy story was going to come up later and I forgot to fix it.. Haha thanks for pointing that out I will fix that :) And I'm glad you are liking it so far. I will update tomorrow or Friday, hopefully

just saying i think liam might want to go on the toy story ride.... PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens next :)