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Traces of Your Touch (An AU Fanfiction) - Comments, page 30

Jebrjdienekfh... Where to start?

First I disagree, I think this was a good chap that held itty bits of info that help build the readers each character puzzle. Like truly despising Amy, for instance. And while I don't usually warm ip to blonde main characters (bc I'm a brunette shhhhh :) I do find an appeal in Aria. And the thought process that she goes through hits very close to home. Like her boy craziness :) Don't we all go through that ;). So I feel a sincere connection, which is great bc your story isn't in first person, which is also refreshing.

Now I also like Louis being the close friend here, he has a lot of interesting things about him that I hadn't considered before. Funny thing is, I love Narry and Ziam, but in my other story I have Liam as the friend ... Anyway, that was a random thought I guess I had to share.

Negative feedback: I'm so involved in your story you're distracting me from writing mine :p lol.

Ciao bellas!
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10/21/13
@Rihanna
Thank you!!!!:) I would suggest Like Crazy, I put the most work/effort into that one!(;
Thanks again!;)
This is awesome. Please continue.
@Meowimafishy

No way! I know for sure that you are an amazing writer! Send me the link to it, so that I can prove you wrong! :D Hurry!!!
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
@Ciao Niccie

Hi there beautiful!! :D Thank you so much for hanging on to the story! :) You're just asdfghjklsdfghjkl! :D And it was a pleasure giving a shout out to such a wonderful writer!! :D I'm the one who felt honored! Loving your story, btw! I always enjoy a good piece of literature! :D And yours is nothing less!

As for the Larry thing, it doesn't really have anything to do with the story. :P It's just that I've seen people get hate for writing about both Harry and Louis in the same fic for no reason at all! :( So I just wanted to assure my readers that I was well aware of the Larry situation and did not want to offend them. :)

Hope I've cleared the misinterpretation! :) Love you, lovely! x :)
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
@bubbles

GOD DAMN, WOMAN! YOU'RE EXPOSING MY PLOT! :P Hahahaha. But there's more to come, love! ;) It'll get even more interesting!

Also, thank you so much for your wonderful words and your enthusiasm! :D It's readers like you who keep us going! :) x We love you!! -N.K
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
@Rihanna
Well I only have one and it kinda sucks!! So maybe you and your friend could give me some tips??
@Louis'sGyrl2013

<3 I know I will! :D
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
@Meowimafishy

Yay! I love you!! :D Gonna start reading your stories as soon as I'm done with a few others! :D So you may wanna let me know which one to start with!! :) Thank you for being so supportive, love! :) We hope to hold on to your faith in this story! :) x <3 -N.K
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
@EMCLARKE12

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I feel so pumped up right now that I want to write another chapter!! :D Thank you so much for your encouragement!! :D I hope I don't disappoint you in the coming chapters! Please keep believing in us this way! :D Thankk you once again!! :D -N.K
Rihanna Rihanna
10/21/13
I'm honored and blushing for the s/o, awwww shucks. :). I'm intrigued that you keep mentioning Larry, I don't know what to expect with that and am left with a daunting question mark...I love it! Faithful till the end! Muah!
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10/21/13
UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! PLZ I LOVE RHIS STORY
misfits misfits
10/20/13
I think Harry is jealous first because he called aria ally and second because he likes her and so does Louis and aria just agreed to go on a date with louis
misfits misfits
10/20/13
@Rihanna
i hope you like them
Yay! I love this story!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH IVE MIASEX READING FANFICS LIKE THIS IM SO GLAD YOURE WRITING THIS PLEse please don't ever give it in!!!!! I appreciate you so much for doing this book:d can't wait to read future chapters:D
EMCLARKE12 EMCLARKE12
10/20/13
@Louis'sGyrl2013

Done! I'm starting tonight after the next update! :D x Can't wait! -N.K
Rihanna Rihanna
10/20/13
@Ginge1999

Aaww.. thank you lovely! :D Will update asap! :D -A.D
Rihanna Rihanna
10/20/13
@Rihanna
oh lol sorry... i would start with be mine then go to u and me forever because be mine leads up to u and me forever