Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 2

Black was the story that I wanted you to review. As I've previously mentioned, English is not my first language and I'm still learning the do's and don't's of it. So it is a little difficult for me to write in the correct format.

Anyways, thank you a lot for that review. It made me happy to read your insight, as I haven't been able to read the story with a critical eye. I know I'm not good with the grammar and I'll definitely fix the bugs that you've mentioned.

Thanks again xx

Ok you seem to be absolutely fantastic at giving reviews, and I need an honest honest opinion for my story Sinister World. It's gotten at least two reviews, but... I just need more pointers, ya'know? Like... am I overusing something? Am I dragging the story out way too long? Things like that. You can take your time with this because the story at the moment is rather long. I am a very patient person and I'm sure you're busy so there's no rush. Thanks in advance x

@starship

Well, better late than never, right? I'm happy that you worked up the courage to make an account and write stories., because I was probably in the same boat as you when I started out on this site -- really nervous and not confident at all because the web is so huge and everything you do is so permanent and out there. Commenting made me nervous, as did voting and especially posting an actual story. I still get post anxiety honestly, because despite saying I don't really care if my story is popular or has a lot of votes, I really do care... just not enough to stop me from writing because it's something I just love to do. (PS- you can totally corrrect me if I was wrong about this) I will most definitely be sure to review yours first thing when I start I reviews again :)

@ThatRandomUnicorn

I had the courage to make an account wayyy after you left this site, so I didn't comment, or vote.or did anything else. My old story sucked, not like it 'just sucked' or was bad or something . . . it was like a failure, a huge failure; with over-used shit and grammatical mistakes (English is not my first language). I could go on and on about it and I would come short of adjectives to describe it . . . how it managed to get nine votes is still a mystery to me ;)

My new story, however, is somewhat an improvement. When you start the reviews again, could you possibly review that for me? It would mean a lot.

I'll pray for your exams . . . mine just finished xx

@starship

Hi! You are so sweet, and your comment has me bubbling up with joy. I didn't realize I was actually missed... What was your old account, or maybe an old story of yours? I have a pretty good memory so it's definitely at least possible I remember you :)

And the reviews and writing and such? I slept on it after I posted that chapter late last night in my small corner of the world... I actually really want to start all of it up again. Reviews sometime early to mid-May after my AP exams next week, and then actually writing a fic maybe starting sometime in the summer. I had a new idea in the works before I fell off the face of this site but I'll probably scrap it and do something completely new before then but we'll see.

Hi, umm . . . it's been a long while. You may not know me, it's my new account. But then, you may not know about my previous account . . .

Anyways, I want to say that I really missed your reviews, and the way you write . . . it always brought a smile on your face. And now that you're back, I would really like to see more of that, of your writing and reviews.

Hello!
I was hoping if you could review my story.
Also, providing me with any helpful pointers and/or constructive feedback on it, to improve on the story.
I'll really appreciate it.
Or any new ideas I could add to my story to make it more interesting and plot twisting.
I would really appreciate it if I got a private message as well.
Please, and Thank you.
Story Name: Moving to England

I am starting a new story and I needed some help. I always see stroties that have different pictures covers that they make on the summary and I don't know how to put my own art work on. I don't have a computer so is there a way to do that on a different device??

Hi, I first just wanna say that people like you make me smile. I love that help fan-fic writers like this. It's just perfect! :)

I was wondering if you could check out my new story, Letters to Larry. Sadly, it only has one chapter, so I understand if you can't rate it properly. (And yes, obviously it's a slash story. I hope you're okay with that!) I would just like to see if this is a story that people can become hooked on, and I really don't feel like writing a bunch of chapters that no one is going to read because the first chapter sucked.

It would mean so much to me! Thank you! :)

Hi, I first just wanna say that people like you make me smile. I love that help fan-fic writers like this. It's just perfect! :)

I was wondering if you could check out my new story, Letters to Larry. Sadly, it only has one chapter, so I understand if you can't rate it properly. (And yes, obviously it's a slash story. I hope you're okay with that!) I would just like to see if this is a story that people can become hooked in, and I really don't feel like writing a bunch of chapters that no one is going to read because the first chapter sucked.

It would mean so much to me! Thank you! :)

@kkgal14
Always better late than never. I'm trying to get through all of my backed up notifications for my reads from when I was awol. I'll definitely have to catch up on Picture Perfect soon! I would now but it's a bit late my time and I have to get up early. Can't wait to see what your characters have been up to xx

I know I'm more than a week late with this, but better late as opposed to never, right? It's nice to receive notifications from you again. Your commentary has been missed, and I can't wait to see some of your newest work xx.

@ThatRandomUnicorn
Awesome!

@not_any_maryjane
You're comments always seem to warm my heart <3 I hope to be writing and posting more frequently once my schedule clears up. Hope all's been well with you. x

@One Direction 1O1 @theodoramae.
Excited to somewhat be back as well. I'm pretty sure I'm here to stay :)

@Niall's.Princess
Not at the moment, sorry :( I'm just trying to sneak time in on here when I can so I don't really have the time to do full on reviews right now. Hopefully, I'll be starting up reviews again by the end of next month (that's my guesstimation right now).

I'm so, so glad you're back! I miss your reviews and tips. I hope you're here to stay.

I am super excited to have you back! I missed your point of views and wisdom :)

Hi love, do you still do reviews?

Hi love, do you still do reviews?

I care :) I really want you to start writing and posting again, and you manage to bring Mainstream and your reviews back. It was nice to have you around, and your reviews were the only ones I've ever read. Stay sharp. Love. x

Hey there love, could you do a review on my story "Contrast between you and me" please I know I've only written a bit but feedback would be lovely. xxx