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Please Be Careful With My Heart - Comments, page 4
I have been keeping up with Cardio and just found this one...I'm about to start reading it...you are a GREAT writer!! I was reading some of the comments on Cardio and I must tell you, I am *a little* older than your average 1D fan also...It is hard to find anyone around my age as into them as I am around me. But I cannot help it...I love them all but I have a weakness for Harry!! He's just so funny and charming and outright sexy!! I can't wait to get started on this story!! :)
My 1st fan fic has reached
100,000 + views
ASDFGHOMGFGHJ!!! You guys are amazingg, thank you for your undying support. My views were 50K when it ended and now its over 100K. I can't believe I'm still getting new suscribers everyday. Which in unbelievable.
There's no other way to show my gratitude but to continue in producing stories that my readers can indulge themself into.
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@cara 1D Romantic me lol. But I reckon if I was a boy I WOULD be the most romantic boy evaaaaa!
Yeah the proposal...I was actually getting sooo jealous of Sammie, I wish I was HER!! I think thats my ideal proposal, but then I guess it wouldnt b interesting anymore because I already know it, because thats what I want to happen.
Yeah the proposal...I was actually getting sooo jealous of Sammie, I wish I was HER!! I think thats my ideal proposal, but then I guess it wouldnt b interesting anymore because I already know it, because thats what I want to happen.
OMG!!
THE proposal - i was like, why the hell isnt this in the movie?
u must be really romantic person! LOVE this story xx. :)
THE proposal - i was like, why the hell isnt this in the movie?
u must be really romantic person! LOVE this story xx. :)
This story ended two months ago! And still the views and suscribers keeps going up :D
If this reaches 100,000 views... I can't even! I literally have the best suscribers and readers on this web.
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@Broadwaygirl1D THANKS so much :) There's a sequel to this, if you wanna keep reading. And I also have another story as well, if ur interested.
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@#6850 Dw I wasn't offended by ur comment, like I said thank you for the critique :)
I admitt the first time I read your respond, I had an assumption that you must have gone or are going through some relationship issue.. Please don't base your situation on my fiction, this is just a story based purely based on my interpretation or perception of things.
I've never been in a dysfunctional relationship, so maybe my knowledge when it comes to heart break and heart ache is not so great...and maybe that's the reason I can be so optimistic about things. But I do understand your opinion and I respect it.
PS: I would have inboxd u instead, but ur from the other fanfic web and it wouldn't allow me.
I admitt the first time I read your respond, I had an assumption that you must have gone or are going through some relationship issue.. Please don't base your situation on my fiction, this is just a story based purely based on my interpretation or perception of things.
I've never been in a dysfunctional relationship, so maybe my knowledge when it comes to heart break and heart ache is not so great...and maybe that's the reason I can be so optimistic about things. But I do understand your opinion and I respect it.
PS: I would have inboxd u instead, but ur from the other fanfic web and it wouldn't allow me.
I'm sorry if I came out rude but I went through a broken heart and I was cheated on I couldn't believe how much a heart ache I had he kept asking entrance back to my heart but I couldn't allow that and their should be a happy ending (I'm not a heartless monster you know :.( I'm still a person) were she finds someone new and Harry feels bad he deserves to feel the pain that is his own fault for cheating (like I said sorry) I really have my critical opinions. I just don't get why she went back (other then that I love your stories and I enjoy reading them) I really just hate seeing people in pain and the person who caused it deserves to suffer (not die) just live without the person and see how it feels.
@#6850 she tried to stop herself from falling for him again! BUT 'No matter how much she tries to resist, her heart always succumbs to HIM'.
She did try to move on from him! It wasn't easy for her to accept his flaws. But her feelings for him are greater than the hate she feels about him. I guess will never know why some people are like that until were put at their position, and we question ourself...is it possible to love again someone who's hurt you.
I'm not saying it's easy to accept what he did. But carrying around that pain inside of you isn't gonna make you any happier. Some people chooses to forgive but not forget. While some are strong enough to do both.
Thank you for your critique though.
How would you have propsed an ending? No happy ending I guess?
She did try to move on from him! It wasn't easy for her to accept his flaws. But her feelings for him are greater than the hate she feels about him. I guess will never know why some people are like that until were put at their position, and we question ourself...is it possible to love again someone who's hurt you.
I'm not saying it's easy to accept what he did. But carrying around that pain inside of you isn't gonna make you any happier. Some people chooses to forgive but not forget. While some are strong enough to do both.
Thank you for your critique though.
How would you have propsed an ending? No happy ending I guess?
WTF!!!! Why did she take Harry back when all he's been is an ass wipe I can't believe you'd do that he cheated on her then he breaks her heart calls her unfaithful when he's the one who's unfaithful and I don't give if he is Harry freaking styles that is F'd up (pfft some story you've written) I wouldn't have gone back if I were her.
ps and to all you girls out there I know it's fake but it deserves other people's opinions
ps and to all you girls out there I know it's fake but it deserves other people's opinions
Hi everyone :)
My new story is called 'CARDIO'. Please read the note I made (1st comment)
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/3010/Cardio/
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My new story is called 'CARDIO'. Please read the note I made (1st comment)
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/3010/Cardio/
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@Harryloverr thank you! But idk i don't really like the sequel of this.... that's why I kinda stop writing, even though I know what am I gonna write
4/13/13