A Vampire world - Comments, page 3

@LiamsLove
i'm glad you love this stroy i spent like an hour and a half writing that chapter i was slow and watching vampire diaries at the same time haha

Love this story! And noo they got him!

@HorsesAndHarry
it's fine I don't mind people asking it can sometimes encourage me to write I haven't got a chapter wrote yet since I'be had quite a bit happening this last few days but I will try to update tomorrow if I can :)

Darn i hate being the one to say update BUT ITS SO GOOD!!!! so please update:)

@FutureMrsPayne
Your welcome

@Emmaaaa
Yayy thanks! :)

@FutureMrsPayne
I'm glad you're enjoying it and sure I'll try to make them shorter :)


@SarahStyles
And yeah I get what your saying but when you think about it it's only two chapters in and like if you read a proper book nothing happens straight away you build up to it so yeah I'm just introducing the book at the moment and something will happen just not yet since if you did make something big happen in the beginning what's their to look forward to but something will happen soon I hope that find't sound to mean if you know what I mean and thanks for telling me I will try to improve it :)

Not to be rude or anything but I think the story is boring I mean nothing's going on. Why don't you twist up the story somehow it would make the story twice as good and it would get alot more likes, do you get what i'm sayin

Its reaaalllyyy good :) but can I suggest something? can you make the chapters a bit shorter since its easier to read that way, but if you don't its still great

@HorsesAndHarry
i've updated :) <3

I Like!! Update Soon!! <3