Read my first fanfic?

I don't want to be pushy or seem desperate, but I was just wondering if people would read it and tell me what they think? :) It is my first story and I just wanted to see what people think of it. Thanks! And if anyone has any ideas for it then feel free to message me! (if I like it and use it I will make sure to give you a shoutout! Promise :D)

I'll read yours :)

Me too i'll read yours please read mine :) you'll like it i bet ya