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When You Let Your Heart Win by emilyloren94

When You Let Your Heart Win


Story Statistics:

Rating: 10.0
Votes: 490
Subscribers: 638
Views: 970,384

(JUST LOOK AT THAT SHIT ^
I ASPIRE TO BE THAT DAMN GOOD AT WRITING)


Story Form:

Title:
When You Let Your Heart Win
Link: When You Let Your Heart Win
Author: emilyloren94
Chapters: 97
Completed: Not too sure
Story Content Rating: R
Genres: Romance, comedy and drama

Review:

-Summary:
The main character, Teddy, is best mates with Louis Tomlinson. At this time, Tommo is with Eleanor Calder; who the author cleverly depicts in her own manner that supported my addiction to the story. Louis and Teddy soon realize the feelings hidden...deep inside each other (literally)...and came out with their newly found fire flames. Eleanor makes everything difficult and the persona she played made me slightly wish her farewell. Soon enough, a twist comes that physically destroyed Teddy's world. But with all the tragedy and mishap- do they end up making it? Find out (:
-My personal review:
This was one of the few first books I EVER read on these sites; it by far was the most complex. It had me in TEARS for poor Teddy and ENRAGED at bimbo Eleanor. Now I personally don't have much against her- but if you read this story...it's hard to not have a bone to pick; even if it's superficial. Me being a young 10 or 11 year old, very impressionable, I fell in love with her writing. I struggled to write myself because I based how successful her story was compared to the dry feed my stories were receiving; but that's no where near her fault. It only inspired me (: But literally, even if you don't finish it, it is a BEAUTIFUL piece that deserves your reading
-My feelings on:
  • The grammar:
Ya know I read this YEARS ago, before it was finished, but I still think highly of the grammar
10/10
  • The flow:
AMAZING- like if One Direction came back together amazing.
10/10
  • The plot:
YES PLEAASSEEE
10/10
  • The characterization:
Don't even get me STARTED. I SOBBED FOR THESE CHARACTERS
10/10
  • My rating out of 10:
11/10
  • Level of recommendation out of 10:
20/10
  • Any tips:
WRITE MORE *cries* COME BACK- WHEREVER YOU ARE
-And a special note:
Honestly, I know she'll never see this. I hope she will but sadly, the chances are thin.
I believe my most favorite part that still makes me laugh is this part of the summary:
"Please remember that this is a fanfiction
Teddy Parker and events are all made up
But Eleanor Calder is in fact a dumb broad"
Just the blunt opinion of Eleanor in such a short sentence fucking KILLS ME

Notes

XxX,
Abygail

Comments

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@bubbles.s
I KNOW RIGHT?!

Oh my God and their first story Test Drive is just as good too, this story I can't even find words to explain.

@JasperRenee
same haha

Liam's Sex Slave was my first fanfiction too lol It really turned me on to fanfiction tbh