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Je dois faire une merde

Chapter 5 - He's cute!

It was exactly 10:00 when I heard the doorbell ring. I was still getting ready when I heard a knock on the door. I usually would do makeup but I wasn't up for the task today. Before I exited my room to go get the door I hear it open.

" Hello love!" I heard my moms high pitched voice coo.

" Uh hi, I'm here for August," I heard Harry's abnormally deep voice say.

" Oh sure she's here AUGUSTA!!!!!" I heard my mom yell to me and I cringed at her using my real name. I rushed downstairs and glared at her. I looked to see Harry standing there with a smirk on his face.

" What?" I humph.

" H-hi Augusta," he chokes out trying to hold back laughter.

I turn to my mom sending him an evil eye.

" I see you've met Harold," I say calmly. Out of the corner of my eye I see him stop laughing and glaring me down. It was now my turn to smirk.

" Oh yes he seems like a nice gentleman," she says oblivious to the glaring.

" Why thank you mam'," he says giving me an evil smirk. What's he planning...?

" Well I was planning on giving her a tour today," he says still smirking.

" Oh have fun," she says sweetly.

" Great I'll have her back by midnight," he says looking at me with wicked eyes.

" MIDNI-" I began to exclaim but am cut off by someone grabbing my wrist before dragging me out the door. He was pulling me along the driveway when I turn to see my mom standing in the doorway waving. She catches my stare and mouths ' He's cute' before turning and shutting the door. My wrist began hurting so I jerked it away from his grip. He turned to be me still smiling as I rubbed my wrist.

" I am not staying out till midnight creep," I glare at him.

" Awh why not?" he says pulling puppy dog eyes.

" That's 14 hours with no naps," I cry.

" Poor thing, you'll make it," he laughs.

" This town is tiny we don't need all that time to explore it," I whine.

" Who said we're staying in town?" He says smirking wickedly.

" And this is my cue to leave," I say turning and making my way back to the house.

" Oh no you don't..." I hear a deep voice mutter form behind me. Before I can turn to see him, he had one arm snaked around my waist, the other just below my thighs. I am suddenly hoisted up bridal style and turned in the opposite direction of the house. Fear strikes in me nervous for were he's taking me.

" H-harry," I whisper looking up at him. He doesn't look at me but his grip tightens. I am now extremely freaked out.

" Harry," I say a little louder. This time he looks down at me and smirks. WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL IS HAPPENING??? I look to see we're standing in front of a black range rover. He gently puts me down but keeps his arm locked around my waist.

" Get in," He says calmly.

" Not until you tell me where we're going," I whine

" Where's the fun in that," he says looking down at me smiling but this time not a smirk. I nod turn and open the passenger side door. I scoot in and buckle my seat belt. The car smells nice like him....Imma creep. He enters the car and slowly pulls out of my driveway.

" I hope you know this is considered kidnapping," I huff under my breath but apparently not quiet enough. He lets out a deep chuckle and turns on the street. What the hell is wrong with this boy...

Notes

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Comments

@TessBeBe
The good thing about reading all these fanfics is you learn which type of writing style you like and which you don't, so that helps you as a writer. Especially since you're still in high school! Don't give up just because you feel inferior to others, I once remember hearing someone say "if your the smartest in the room. You're in the wrong room." You can learn from these fellow writers, because some of them are so amazing I don't understand how they aren't published authors yet! You'll get there one day too! I know it, you have great potential and I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep it up, I love it Xx

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Glad to see I'm not the only with troubles. I was afraid my computer had a virus or something...I don't know any about technology.

I had the same experience. I had read a lot too and felt my writing was inferior to other people on the site ( which it is ) and I didn't have any new ideas to bring to the table. I'm just trying doing this kind of writing and see where it takes me. I'm still in high school ( sadly ) so we have to do a lot of boring writing but this site is my creative escape for writing and I really enjoy doing it and reading others. I would never read anything from my junior high, it and my writing was horrible. I don't think I even knew how to spell grammar let alone use it!

Thank you, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one. I lost my dad a little less than a year ago and it's scary, hard, and a pain no one should have to go through. The beginning is the worst so I know exactly how he's feeling. The pain never really leaves but having support from family, friends and I guess in his case fans can mean the world.

TessLove TessLove
6/23/17

@TessBeBe
Oh yeah, I totally know what you mean! One time I uploaded a chapter and I needed to edit it, but it would not let me even open it for the life of me! It was so annoying, I don't know what happened or what I had to do to finally get it to the editing screen!

But thank you for saying that! I read a bunch, and I was reading a lot of fanfictions before I finally had the nerve to actually write one myself. Before I got into fanfiction, I was actually working on continuing a short story I had to write when I was a junior in high school. I finished it, but I don't know I feel about it lol It's been a while since I've even opened it up.

Anyways, I love how you posted about Harry. I'm the same way, I may have even said a little prayer for their hard times. It's never easy losing a loved one.

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Thank you so much. I did know for chapter 4, I had written it normally but then the website was being weird so I copied it and then pasteted it so for whatever reason it looked different and I'm to lazy to change it. Btw I wouldn't have been able to guess it's your first story it's really really good xD

TessLove TessLove
6/22/17

ALL CAUGHT UP! So cute!

P.S. Idk why but your layout for chapter 4 is different, like it's all in one single paragraph. I assumed it was an accident since your other chapters aren't like that, so I just wanted to make you aware :)

Can't wait to see what's next!