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Je dois faire une merde

chapter 4 - Morning Scarecrow

I woke up as a bright light shone through the windows of my room. I turned to look at my phone it was 6 in the morning British time. I've had a weird sleeping schedule and have had little power naps instead of real sleep. I decided I would go for a quick jog and spend the rest of the day exploring the town. I was still wearing my sweater and jeans from yesterday. I peeled them off and through on a pair of black yoga pants and a white t-shirt. I walked downstairs and wrote my parents a note saying I was out jogging. I plugged in my headphones and began to jog. Since i had no idea were I was going I just ran in one direction so I wouldn't get lost.After about an hour I reached my block and decided to sprint the rest of the way." RUN FOREST RUN," I heard a voice yell. I slowed and turned off my music before my eyes connected with a pair of green eyes. Harry was jogging up to me." Morning scarecrow," I laughed." Morning zombie," he rolled his eyes. " What has you up so early?""I'm on a weird sleep schedule I guess," I replied " What's your excuse?"" I usually get up early to jog, it's quiet," He said softly looking into my eyes." Y-yeah," I stammered like an idiot lost in his eyes." How did you even navigate around, you just moved here?" He asked breaking eye contact." I just ran in one direction and turned around when I got tired," I laughed." Clever," He smiled." Yeah I'm taking myself on a tour today and hope I don't get lost," I told him." If you want I could show you around," he said with a crooked smirk." Do you really want to spend your day with an annoying 16 year old girl who will be constantly asking ' what's this?' and ' what's that?'," I asked returning his smirk." It would be my pleasure," he replied " You're 16?" he said changing the subject." Yeah you?" I asked." 17 little girl," he said looking down at me once again making eye contact. Was it weird I liked him calling me little girl? Well like I said I'm a pervert xD" Grandpa," I laughed." What was little girl?" he said pretending to be a 70 year old man." Turn up your hearing aid," I giggled." Don't disrespect your elders," he said a smile tugging at his lips. His PERFECT rosy pink lips that all kinds of plump, may I add." Sorry don't hit me with your cane," I laughed. His face turned to stone and became very serious. he furrowed his eyebrows and managed to look even bigger as he towered over me. I've always been tiny but this was fair, he was just under a foot taller than me. I felt very small and intimidated." I would never hit you..," He whispered just under his breath." Oh I-I know I was just j-joking..." I stammered feeling flustered. His eyes burned into mine." I'll give you your tour at 10," he said straightening out before turning and jogging away. What the hell was that? You can't just get really serious out of no where and act like nothing happened. I stood there for a few seconds staring as he rounded the corner disappearing out of my view. I realized I hadn't breathed and let out a huge breath. I turned and headed to my house. I shut the door and slid down against it. Holy shit. He's not getting out my head any time soon is he?

Notes

any feedback helps

Comments

@TessBeBe
The good thing about reading all these fanfics is you learn which type of writing style you like and which you don't, so that helps you as a writer. Especially since you're still in high school! Don't give up just because you feel inferior to others, I once remember hearing someone say "if your the smartest in the room. You're in the wrong room." You can learn from these fellow writers, because some of them are so amazing I don't understand how they aren't published authors yet! You'll get there one day too! I know it, you have great potential and I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep it up, I love it Xx

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Glad to see I'm not the only with troubles. I was afraid my computer had a virus or something...I don't know any about technology.

I had the same experience. I had read a lot too and felt my writing was inferior to other people on the site ( which it is ) and I didn't have any new ideas to bring to the table. I'm just trying doing this kind of writing and see where it takes me. I'm still in high school ( sadly ) so we have to do a lot of boring writing but this site is my creative escape for writing and I really enjoy doing it and reading others. I would never read anything from my junior high, it and my writing was horrible. I don't think I even knew how to spell grammar let alone use it!

Thank you, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one. I lost my dad a little less than a year ago and it's scary, hard, and a pain no one should have to go through. The beginning is the worst so I know exactly how he's feeling. The pain never really leaves but having support from family, friends and I guess in his case fans can mean the world.

TessLove TessLove
6/23/17

@TessBeBe
Oh yeah, I totally know what you mean! One time I uploaded a chapter and I needed to edit it, but it would not let me even open it for the life of me! It was so annoying, I don't know what happened or what I had to do to finally get it to the editing screen!

But thank you for saying that! I read a bunch, and I was reading a lot of fanfictions before I finally had the nerve to actually write one myself. Before I got into fanfiction, I was actually working on continuing a short story I had to write when I was a junior in high school. I finished it, but I don't know I feel about it lol It's been a while since I've even opened it up.

Anyways, I love how you posted about Harry. I'm the same way, I may have even said a little prayer for their hard times. It's never easy losing a loved one.

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Thank you so much. I did know for chapter 4, I had written it normally but then the website was being weird so I copied it and then pasteted it so for whatever reason it looked different and I'm to lazy to change it. Btw I wouldn't have been able to guess it's your first story it's really really good xD

TessLove TessLove
6/22/17

ALL CAUGHT UP! So cute!

P.S. Idk why but your layout for chapter 4 is different, like it's all in one single paragraph. I assumed it was an accident since your other chapters aren't like that, so I just wanted to make you aware :)

Can't wait to see what's next!