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Je dois faire une merde

Chapter 2 - rain rain go away

After a horrible sleep on a 17 hour flight, we finally landed. After about another 45 minutes of slowly shuffling off the plane, getting our luggage, and getting into our rental we pulled away. It was early evening at 5:30 pm they're time, and 11:30 pm my time. It was raining miserably which represented my feelings at the moment perfectly. I plugged in my headphones and let David Bowie flood my senses, as we embarked on our 3 hour drive.

" Pssst pssst fat ass wake up," I heard my lovely brother whisper in my ear but not quiet enough.

" Evan Rose watch your language ," my mom shot at him.

" Mom I'm 18 I can handle myself," he whined,

" Are we almost there?" I asked from the back seat.

" We are there that's why I was waking you up ugly," Evan sneered.

" Evan....," mom glared at him.

" IMMA PURTY GRILLLL," I screeched.

" HAHhahhaHAAhhhahaHahAH," Evan giggled.

" UR JUST A FUGLY BOIII TOY EVAN," I laughed.

" This is why I regret children," my murmured from the front, sending Evan and me into an even bigger fit of laughter.

Our car pulled up on a cute little street filled with tons of houses. I looked out and saw a group of kids who were about my age hanging out on the driveway of one of the houses. Our car turned into the driveway of the house right next door. The house was quite big, it was white with blue shingles. It had a big yard that looked perfect for gardening which made me very happy! I looked over to see the kids by the house next door stopped talking and goofing around and were now looking at us. There looked to be about 5 2 girls and 3 guys which instantly made me think of my friends at home. A pang of sadness overtook me for a second before my eyes locked with bright green eyes momentarily stunning me.

Notes

Ok sorry this one was shorter. Who do you think the eyes belong to haha...?

Comments

@TessBeBe
The good thing about reading all these fanfics is you learn which type of writing style you like and which you don't, so that helps you as a writer. Especially since you're still in high school! Don't give up just because you feel inferior to others, I once remember hearing someone say "if your the smartest in the room. You're in the wrong room." You can learn from these fellow writers, because some of them are so amazing I don't understand how they aren't published authors yet! You'll get there one day too! I know it, you have great potential and I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep it up, I love it Xx

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Glad to see I'm not the only with troubles. I was afraid my computer had a virus or something...I don't know any about technology.

I had the same experience. I had read a lot too and felt my writing was inferior to other people on the site ( which it is ) and I didn't have any new ideas to bring to the table. I'm just trying doing this kind of writing and see where it takes me. I'm still in high school ( sadly ) so we have to do a lot of boring writing but this site is my creative escape for writing and I really enjoy doing it and reading others. I would never read anything from my junior high, it and my writing was horrible. I don't think I even knew how to spell grammar let alone use it!

Thank you, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one. I lost my dad a little less than a year ago and it's scary, hard, and a pain no one should have to go through. The beginning is the worst so I know exactly how he's feeling. The pain never really leaves but having support from family, friends and I guess in his case fans can mean the world.

TessLove TessLove
6/23/17

@TessBeBe
Oh yeah, I totally know what you mean! One time I uploaded a chapter and I needed to edit it, but it would not let me even open it for the life of me! It was so annoying, I don't know what happened or what I had to do to finally get it to the editing screen!

But thank you for saying that! I read a bunch, and I was reading a lot of fanfictions before I finally had the nerve to actually write one myself. Before I got into fanfiction, I was actually working on continuing a short story I had to write when I was a junior in high school. I finished it, but I don't know I feel about it lol It's been a while since I've even opened it up.

Anyways, I love how you posted about Harry. I'm the same way, I may have even said a little prayer for their hard times. It's never easy losing a loved one.

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Thank you so much. I did know for chapter 4, I had written it normally but then the website was being weird so I copied it and then pasteted it so for whatever reason it looked different and I'm to lazy to change it. Btw I wouldn't have been able to guess it's your first story it's really really good xD

TessLove TessLove
6/22/17

ALL CAUGHT UP! So cute!

P.S. Idk why but your layout for chapter 4 is different, like it's all in one single paragraph. I assumed it was an accident since your other chapters aren't like that, so I just wanted to make you aware :)

Can't wait to see what's next!