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The Notebook

Chapter 1

ALLIES POV:
"Lets do this" jennifer exclaimed jumping into the bumper cart. i laughed and did the same, Jennifers friends soon joined us.
"Hey ol' al" the guy name john cheerfully said giving me a smile and then shuffling hiself into the bumper cart.

"hey john" i said waving and smiling. he was in a ridiculous outfit, it was blue and white, but it was classy. soon we started the bumper carts and bumped in to one another. i couldnt help but laugh uncontrolably, i also couldnt help but notice a guy that looked around my age stare at me with those emerald green eyes, that glowed in the carnaval lights. i noticed the strange guy whisper into Jennifers boyfriend ear. i acted like it was no big deal.
"Hey Jen Baby i gotcha something!" jennifers boyfriend yelled at her shaking a small teddy bear smiling big. she squealed really loud and soon we gotten off.

HARRY POV:

i noticed a beautiful girl laughing incontrolably. her blonde hair flowing in the wind of the bumper carts, her smile gave me chill bumps.
"who is that" i asked my good friend louis. i kept staring at her analyzing her.
"oh, thats jens friend Allie, she is staying here for the summer." he replied, before yelling at jennifer shaking the little bear he won for her. i smiled a little at them and how sweet she acted toward louis. but my eyes glued to Allie, her beauty made me weak, i wanted her. soon they jumped off the bumper carts, and louis was going to join them. i followed louis to the group, where i met Allie, i blocked her from walking anoymore, stepping right in front of her, our faces about two feet away from each others. my eyes glued to hers, she looked confused and annoyed.

"do you want to dance with me" i asked. she looked at me annoyed and rolled her eyes,

"uh.. no" she replied about to walk away, but i stopped her.

"please" i asked kind of smiling at her.

"Dude, just accept the fact that you just got rejected!" one of her guy friends said laughing with her. i ignored him,

"hey allie wanna go ride the Ferris Wheel?" he asked and she nodded,

"yeah" she said smirking at me, sort of teasing me. i chuckled at her behaviour, she was a fiesty one.

ALLIES POV:

"that was weird" i told jennifer, after walking away from that strange, but handsome guy.

"Allie!" louis exclaimed giving me a hug.

"hey Lou" i said smiling, still kind of annoyed from that guy. i felt john grab my arm and pull me towards the Ferris Wheel, getting a seat. we laughed and joked. thats when i saw the guy staring at me in the distance. i kind of felt weird, he felt like a creeper to me, which was a turn-off. i started to see him run up to the Ferris Wheel, and jump right into our seat.

"What the- Seriously!" me and john yelled at him angrily and confused. he smirked at me, obviously ignoring john.

"hello, im harry" he said holding out his hand for me to shake, i looked disgusted and rolled my eyes, waiting for him to do something else stupid.

"do you know this guy!?" john asked freaking out.

"apparently harry" i said annoyed. thats when i felt the ferris wheel stopped,

"Harry! you know that there is only supposed to be two people to a seat! now stop foolin around boy!" the guy that ran the Ferris Wheel yelled up at harry. thats when harry waved his hand as in a sorry. he gotten up from the seat and jumped to the bar in front of us and hung on to it.

"AHH- What The crap it wrong with you!?" i screamed in fright.

"do you want to go out with me?" he asked still holding on the bar. my expression went from fright to are-you-serious,

"What? NO!" i said annoyed. he took one hand off the bar dangling on the bar. i screamed in fear,

"HARRY, IT YOU'RE GONNA GET YOURSELF KILLED!" jennifer yelled in the seat below us, with louis.

"now, m'am im gonna ask you one more time, do you want to go out with me? - ah, i think my hands slipping" he said trying to hold on to the bar.

"yes ill go out with you!" i exclaimed in fear.

"now dont do me any favors" he said still trying to keep his grip.

"Yes, i want to go out with you!" i exclaimed.

"you swear? say that you want to go out with me" he said about to slip.

"YES! I WANT TO GO OUT WITH YOU!" i screamed at him as loud as i could. he smirked,

"okay, okay, we'll go out" he said puling himself back into our seat. i sighed in relief, but i was still annoyed.

Notes

comment, i know i told you it would be similar to the movie but some things are different i just thought it would make a great fanfiction. okay well tell me if you like it.

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